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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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[[Hee, lots of tutoring during the school year. Here's more proof grammar is not my forte', I'm going into 11th grade, it didn't start to connect until 9th. I usually wing it and hope it's right or at least is easy to read.]]
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dragonite
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco
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(( ooh. I'm going into 7th I think my grammar is adequate. Whatever, this is kinda off topic ))
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 4:39 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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[[I feel so OLD! Eh, my role-play is a jumbled mess right now, besides ooc doesn't really bother me.]]
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 5:01 pm |
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heartofdarkness77
Ace Trainer
Joined: Thu Jul 20, 2006 9:45 am Posts: 429 Location: Over the rainbow
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continuing the converstion with ella and caroline
"WOW! I never thought a teacher would take a pokemon" Evan said " I feel bad for Your torchic. Wait i got a idea why dont we sneak into mr. Willows office and get your torchic". Slash looked at Vixie while Vixie was coughing up smoke and Slash got scared and jumped up into Evans arm. Evan pulled out a berry he got earlier from a bush and gave it to Slash. "We can sneak in tonight. What do you say?"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 5:59 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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"Willow's gone" Ella said, "That won't work. That's sweet of you, though."
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:26 pm |
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dragonite
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco
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"Yeah. Lets go down to the headmaster's office, maybe they can do something. What do you say?"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:29 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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[[And Crimson said, due to some begging, "Let it be morning! Cook-a-doodle-doo!"]]
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:46 pm |
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Birdknight
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:47 am Posts: 917
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You know what to do queen...
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:47 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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Ella had had a hard time sleeping the night before without the familiar presence of- wait, hold on. There was something feathered on her pillow. She sat up with a start. "Spark?" she asked, disbelieving, "Is it really you?"
"Tor!" Spark said happily.
Ella freaked out. "OH MY GOD!!!" she said, "SPARK'S BACK!!!"
Yeah, she probably woke up the entire school with that.
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:54 pm |
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Birdknight
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:47 am Posts: 917
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(then, Ella heard a malevolent laugh "MUAHAHAHAHA!" but was too overjoyed to care...)
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:57 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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Thorn barely woke up. In fact she was only awake enough to throw a pillow at her to make her be quiet and roll over to go back to sleep.
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:57 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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"THORN!" she complained, "I got my SPARK back!!! Isn't that exciting?"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:59 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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She didn't turn over, "You're just dreaming, so be quiet." Thorn was obviously not a morning person.
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:02 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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Ella rolled her eyes. "Dreams don't have feathers." she replied. SHe walked over to Thorn's bed and put Spark on Thorn's head. "Still think it's a dream?"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:06 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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Thorn's eyes snapped open at the feel of the taloned toes of the bird Pokemon. She reached up and snatched it off her head. Then she sat up and stared at the little orange bird. "How did it get back so quickly? I doubt it could get back on its own, not with Willow's Gengar. So, that would mean she brought it back. But why so soon?" Thorn asked, of course, as soon as she's slightly awake she began to question what was going on and everything's alternative movtives. What else could one expect from Thorn?
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:10 pm |
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dragonite
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco
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"Ella, could you keep it down?" Caroline said, yawning. "I'm trying to sleep. And whats all the excitment for?"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:17 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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Ella shook her head. "I don't care." she said happily, "I got my Sparky back!!!"
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:18 pm |
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heartofdarkness77
Ace Trainer
Joined: Thu Jul 20, 2006 9:45 am Posts: 429 Location: Over the rainbow
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Evan could feel the sun pour through the window and his Sandshrew was already up " Slash are u hungry" Evan walked over to the drawer and pulled out his cloth and put them on. Slash was playing with a tennis ball he found under the bed. Evan put on his hat and grabbed sandshrew and headed for breakfast.
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How are my posts been so far Are they getting better
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:34 pm |
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Birdknight
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:47 am Posts: 917
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(They are soooooo much better, great improvement!..one comment...spell out the whole word, like instead of "u" type "you", its good, just that will make it better...)
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:36 pm |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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[[They're much better, thanks for listening to me and not reacting in a not so kind way. Bird Knight and I bashed heads a few days back, didn't we? X3]]
Thorn handed the Torchic back to Ella. "I'm happy for you, now if you'll excuse me." She laid back down and tried to go back to sleep. At the moment, sleep was very appealing.
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:45 pm |
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queenofinsanity
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:11 pm Posts: 238 Location: Across the Wall
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Ella sighed. "I'm heading off to breakfast." she said. She quickly dressed and headed out. Food and company sounded much more appealing than sleep at the moment.
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:56 pm |
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heartofdarkness77
Ace Trainer
Joined: Thu Jul 20, 2006 9:45 am Posts: 429 Location: Over the rainbow
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Thank you guys for the comments I'm trying harder
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look lol
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Evan and Slash were walking down the and then saw Ella. "Ella are you going to breakfast . "Well if you are can you come sit with me You can bring Caroline to". "If you dont want to I understand" Evan said in a sad voice.
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Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:04 am |
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dragonite
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco
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(( Nice job, heartofdarkness! ))
Caroline decided that she was going to get up. "Vixie, wake up, its morning!" Caroline got dressed, and went to the breakfast table with Vixie. She poured herself a bowl of cereal and let Vixie sit on her lap. "Aww.. Vixie, do you want some cereal?" she cooed. She fed Vixie a few pieces as well.
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Tue Aug 15, 2006 8:13 am |
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heartofdarkness77
Ace Trainer
Joined: Thu Jul 20, 2006 9:45 am Posts: 429 Location: Over the rainbow
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{{{ ummm Crimson how do u get your link in ur picture}}}
Evan was waiting for an answer from Ella.
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Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:40 am |
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm Posts: 716 Location: USA EST
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[[You mean like the one in my sig? My sig is using BBCode.
BBC:
Code: [url=such and such desired site][img]url for image[/img][/url]
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