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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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Hi! I'm new here and I would like to show you some of my work.
I made two fusions, and as you can see, I mixed Cubone + Onix and Marowak + Steelix.
Cubonix:
Steelwak:
I'm not very good at this, and I'd like to get some constructive critique.
EDIT:
I tried to make the bones look better. Here is the result:
Cubonix:
Steelwak:
Here is a new fusion,
Jimecho:
2nd EDIT:
More stuff:
Nidocruel:
Nidocool:
iPod Pokemon:
From Green to Diamond/Pearl colours:
Yellow to D/P:
Red/Blue to D/P:
Last edited by Equinoxe on Sun Sep 09, 2007 3:40 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:26 am |
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goldenquagsire
Art Commentator
Joined: Tue Apr 11, 2006 11:39 am Posts: 2467 Location: London, UK
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Correction: you ARE good at this. The heads look brilliant, exactly how Ninty would do 'em (although more... bizarre). Scratch-sprited, no? I'd say the things you need to improve on are the bones - on Cubonix' tail, it looks rather odd and out-of-place. Maybe avoiding it altogether would've been good. Steelwak's bone is badly coloured, and it doesn't match with the rest of the body. Also, there's no line where it connects with the body, but it doesn't have the same shade as the body either. You should fix that.
If those are your early sprites, then I'd say you've got a lot of potential.
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:04 am |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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I agree that the bones look odd, and I'm going to do something to them. Maybe quite soon.
Thanks for the critique!
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:34 am |
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tigerd
PROBATION
Joined: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:33 pm Posts: 89 Location: That's the way! Uh-uh, uh-uh! I like it! Uh-Uh, -Uh-Uh!
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Yeah those are good.
Are they your first try?
You have potential.
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:05 am |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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tigerd wrote: Yeah those are good.
Are they your first try?
You have potential.
Thanks!
No, they're not my first, but I've done just something like 10 fusions/other things before. And most of them were crappy.
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:37 am |
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Fearow
Bug Catcher
Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:22 pm Posts: 23 Location: Please don't feed the animals! XD
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Really good.
I don't believe your others were crappy !
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:40 pm |
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goldenquagsire
Art Commentator
Joined: Tue Apr 11, 2006 11:39 am Posts: 2467 Location: London, UK
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Better! The shading on the bones are good, blends well with the bodies of the sprites. Jimecho is also great... can't really see anything wrong with it.
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:46 pm |
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Fearow
Bug Catcher
Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:22 pm Posts: 23 Location: Please don't feed the animals! XD
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Yeah, i like Jimecho, too!
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:52 pm |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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Thanks to you all!
Now here's more of my stuff:
From Green to Diamond/Pearl colours:
Rapidash:
Psyduck:
Red/Blue to D/P:
Hitmonlee:
Lapras:
Gyarados:
Yellow to D/P:
Scyther:
Articuno:
Venusaur:
Wartortle:
Ivysaur:
Ninetales:
Enjoy!
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 4:32 am |
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pokemonever515
Fails at life
Joined: Thu May 10, 2007 5:45 pm Posts: 320 Location: anywhere
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once you get 50 post go to the shop approval then make sure they say yes!
10/10
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 7:37 am |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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pokemonever515 wrote: once you get 50 post go to the shop approval then make sure they say yes!
10/10
Oh thanks!
I didn't know I'm that good.
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:17 am |
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pokemonever515
Fails at life
Joined: Thu May 10, 2007 5:45 pm Posts: 320 Location: anywhere
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your shading is awsome and fusions are awsome
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:29 am |
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Ghett0
Fails at life
Joined: Tue Jun 12, 2007 12:23 pm Posts: 546 Location: Isn't my avatar just so cute! :D
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Hmmm, problem with the revamps; dots. Dots are the ugly pixels outside the outline. Darken them, it'll look much better. And on Cubonix, the bone looks out of place and.... it doesn't really blend in; on the Steelwak it looks cool like that; you might want to try recoloring the bone on Cubonix.
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 5:59 pm |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:46 am |
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psynvrn
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Mon Jul 09, 2007 1:05 am Posts: 199 Location: Indonesia
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The nidocool and cubonix (in my opinion) would look better without the horns. However the another one (especially mewtwo centaur) rocks, i rate them 10/10!!
_________________"Devotion, Determination, and Dedication is just what a leader requires." -psynvrn, 2008
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:02 am |
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Pearlman15
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:58 am Posts: 146 Location: Area 23 of Section 2, If you come by an Albino, youve gone to far.
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I like the TC, and the Fusions are good. I really really like them. 9/10
_________________ I have lost interest in Pokemon for good, ive traded in my Diamond and Pearl games and have thrown away the archives, goodbye.
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:24 pm |
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Ghett0
Fails at life
Joined: Tue Jun 12, 2007 12:23 pm Posts: 546 Location: Isn't my avatar just so cute! :D
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Yeah, yeah, that's what I'm talking about! Cubonix's bone looks much better, and the dots are removed! 10/10!
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:26 pm |
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Equinoxe
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:30 am Posts: 160 Location: ~trouble~
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Oh yeah! I made a lot of weird stuff!
Fusions:
Scythken:
Tropiuslee:
Mothly:
Bulbadum: Metasaur: Venugross:
Pinkorita: Beautileef: Megacoon:
Less-fat Wartortle:
Other stuff:
Regiflame:
Very angry Regirock (my personal fav):
Whew! That needed a lot of copypaste.
I hope that you enjoy and comment!
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 10:32 am |
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