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 When You Wish.... (Chapter 13 Up!) 

How would you rate my story so far... (0-5 scale)
0: It sux. 7%  7%  [ 1 ]
1: It's not very good. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
2: It's alright. 7%  7%  [ 1 ]
3: It's pretty good. 29%  29%  [ 4 ]
4: It's quite good. 21%  21%  [ 3 ]
5: It's excellent, incridible, superior, good even [/snaglepuss] 36%  36%  [ 5 ]
Total votes : 14

 When You Wish.... (Chapter 13 Up!) 
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cool...a blue bob-omb....


9.9999/10

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Awsome Story S_S! It's random, it's cool, it's silly, and Luigi's in the emergency room, truely a great story 9.5/10


Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:39 am
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Yeah, this is Chapter 6.
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When You Wish: By Sneaky_Sneasel

Chapter 6: The (Main) Journey Begins, and 2 New Heroes to Boot!

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ya,the losers to the rescue :P

9.5/10

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Just want to make a couple annoucments.

1. I also post my story on Fanfiction.net; my story on that site also contains exclusive conversations with Ludwig von Koopa (Chapters 3, 4, and 6)

If you want to see those, click on this --> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2305081/1/

2. I also started an RP based on my story, if you would like to join it, just give me a PM.

The RP is here --> http://dynamic.gamespy.com/~psypoke/for ... php?t=3168

Now I don't mean to beg, but PLEASE join my RP. :cry:

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are you still gonna continue it here tho?(sorry but i dont do rp's

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Yes, I post it here and fanfiction.net. So don't worry. Chapter 7 won't be put up til Saturday though.

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Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:27 pm
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Ludwig:

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& I thought me & my friends were completely random.S_S, it's amazing I haven't fallen backwards out of my chair laughing, especially when you come in & seconds later, say"Team Rocket's blasting off again!"

:lol: *chokes while laughing*


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it was quiet good i like it .so i voted is was quiet good.

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I finally chose to contiune on with this story, and I do plan to finish it. If I do forget again, a nice threatning PM should motivate me. Anyway, here's Chapter 8.

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Campfire song song? plagerism I say!
If the streetitis progresses further will luigi turn into a street?
Its a really good story and quite random indeed. If its a smash bros. story are you going toinclude other charactrs such as falco, capt. Valcon, mr. Game & watch?

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The SSBM thing was ther just because he likes to play SSBM. That's all. It's just a really awesome game.

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Are you going to keep going because its been about a week since the last chapter.

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Rome wasn't built in a day. Be patient, it'll be done in a few days. I'm close to being done.

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After being away from here for a few days, I'm back, and with Chapter NINE!
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When You Wish: By SneakySneasel

Chapter 9: Everybody

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Ingenious.

I have no clue how you can come up with these incredibly long and funny chapters. I must learn your secret!

The Huff n' Puff stuff was too much for me. XD But man, he was a hard boss, btw!


The one and only minor bad aspect of this story is that you make Mario attach -a to words too much. XP

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When You Wish: By Sneaky_Sneasel

Chapter 10: Lol a Date

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Very nice, as usual. I like how you are mixing in alot of Paper Mario characters. :P


10/10! :mrgreen:

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When You Wish: By SneakySneasel

Chapter 11: On the (Cape) Brink! But First

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Double post, so what?

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Chapter 12: Fire vs. Water, Battle of Anger!



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Come on...somebody comment...please.
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When You Wish: by SneakySneasel

Chapter 13: Yoshi

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lol, SO NICE! I LIKE THIS MAN!

my rate?

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hilarious enough to make me watch this thread for Replies!
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thats preety good mine is the discovery of stizzix please make a post there

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