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OMG Flarey writes fictions? Well, as a matter of fact, yes she does! Except I never post them :P

Oh, excuse me.

*squishes an ant that crawled onto her arm*

Now where were we? That's right! Well, I have a lot of useless Study lessons in my school week, so I figured I might as well use them for something interesting. Every day when I'm in Study I'll come in here and write something. Maybe it'll all make sense, maybe they'll be random short stories. I don't actually know ^_^

Lol, my French teacher just came up to me and gave me some French sheets. She said something to me, but I'm listening to
Thunderstruck on my cell phone and couldn't hear a word she said XD

So, here's the first installment! Will it make sense? Will I write whatever I like and hope someone gets it? Or will Flarey's extreme randomnes take over all of Psypoke, and one day the world?! Let's not push our luck, eh...


"There. Correctly filed." Standing up, Admin brushed off his hands and looked around his office as the filing cabinet drawer closed on its own. He had just finished updating Draco's file after the DracuLatios had successfully passed all the tests required to become a Chosen. Draco was now officially the Guardian of the Creator, and now his file said so.

Glancing out his open door, Admin saw several bird-like creatures fly over the courtyard, reminding him of something.

"I should check up with Tonbar, see how Trunk is going..." he murmured. Walking out of his office, he made his way across the courtyard, heading towards a low building on the other side of it, to the right of the big golden palace gates, and just inside the walls of the palace. The building was the Headquarters of the Realm4, and was strictly off-limits to anyone except Admin and the Realm4 themselves - unless someone had Admin's permission.

As he walked into the building, Admin kept an ear out for anyone approaching. Walking through the small entry hall, he nodded to the guard standing stationary just inside the automatic doors. Across the hall on the opposite wall were four doors, each leading to one of the four quarters of the Realm4.

Entering Tonbar's private medical ward, Admin saw a flash of color in a bed on the far side of the room. Tonbar himself was nowhere to be seen, and as Admin drew closer to the bed he saw that the little Phanpy/Growlithe fusion was lying still.

"Trunk?" he asked kindly, moving closer. The little fusion had come down with Realm Flu a few days earlier, and Tonbar had taken him into his medical centre as a quarantine.

"Trunk?" Admin asked again. Something was wrong, he could sense it. Approaching the bed, he reached out and placed a hand on Trunk's side. Gasping, he stepped back, staring in horror. The fusion was dead.

"Forse!!!!!"

His powerful wings carrying him quickly back through the halls, Admin thought hard about what could have happened. Death had not been possible in the Realms for over seven millenium, not through sickness, not old age, not through anything. Realmens simply did not die whilever they were in the Realms.

"FORSE!"

"Sir, what's wrong?!" Dashing out from another hallway, Darmed stopped short, dark red eyes wild. Landing in front of her, Admin folded his wings quickly.

"Where is Forse?! Trunk is dead!!"
"Dead?! How is that possible, sir??"
"I don't know, I must find Forse!"
"I last saw him in his quarters, sir."
"Thankyou." Dashing into the third hallway off the small entry hall, Admin continued to call for Forse.

Forse was in power over Life and Death in the Realms, which so far had only meant that he'd organized where new characters lived and what they were classified as. Death had never been an issue.

"Forse!" Throwing open the door to Forse's bedchamber, Admin stared in horror. Forse was sprawled, unmoving, on the floor at the foot of his bed.

"In darkmind's name, what has happened here..." Admin murmured in dismay, staring in shock at Forse's unmoving form.


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Will you be adding more to this particular story or will it be a new tale each time ?
but other wise that was interesting

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Well, it depends on what I feel like writing at the time :P Maybe I'll come back to an older cliff-hung story, maybe I won't.

Today's epic is a short scene from an RP I'm currently madly in love with ^_^


[color=mediumpurple]Staring in silent horror, Admin and the others waited. The metal chamber built into the strange machine stood unmoving, a spark flickering at the back where the black plug had been plugged in.



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LOL double post

So what happens if an explanation isn't actually an explanation?


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Both stories are very cool, but the one in mediumpurple font is a bit more exciting. I don't think I need to say you have a very good grammar and control over the whole plot and organization of the stories. Keep them up. ;)

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Emerging into the light, the figure stopped and surveyed them all. It was Flarey, but Flarey unlike anything they had ever seen before. She had been in her Creator form when she had entered the machine, and she still was now


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The place all these stories are happening in is called The realms of imagination (Or just The Realms), where all human creations live. Admin is the emporor, Forse, Darmed, Tonbar, and Amphen are his Elite 4, who each take care of some aspect of the realms. Flarey's the creator of the Realms, so she has powers no one else there has. Flarey's explained it in Psyche- she could probably answer any questions you might have. :)

I like these stories, particularly the orange one. The purple one doesn't really make as much sense, having such a catastrophe at an invention contest. Still, the story is entertaining, and they're well written.
More, more!


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Jodi wrote:
The place all these stories are happening in is called The realms of imagination (Or just The Realms), where all human creations live. Admin is the emporor, Forse, Darmed, Tonbar, and Amphen are his <s>Elite 4</s> Realm 4, Jodi :wink: , who each take care of some aspect of the realms. Flarey's the creator of the Realms, so she has powers no one else there has. Flarey's explained it in Psyche- she could probably answer any questions you might have. :)


Darmed, Forse, Amphen and Tonbar are the Realm 4 - four creations made by Admin to serve him and keep different aspects of the Realms in balance. But now, now, Jodi, we musn't give too much away - Admin wouldn't be impressed :wink:

Banov, thanks so much for the critical analysis ^_^

About the self-insertion, that's just coz I am who I am :P I am the Creator, and as such, I'm in the Realms. If you wish you may keep the character seperate from myself, or you may think of it as being me who does all of this - in the same way Role Plays are founded. These are all based on Role Plays and such, so far - compliments to Paul for all the inspiration! :wink:

RE: Not knowing where it is - that's the point! It's a land of imagination, it's where all the characters that human create come to life and exist, so of course, it can look like what you want it to :wink: Well, except for Admin's palace that is...


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Couldn't you have said that somehwere in the story? Not everyone's a part of Team Psyche and can read your explanations >___>


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I did warn you it wouldn't make sense :P


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But that's no good! :/ If you take this seriously you really ought to add a gradual description into the first chapter/entry.


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"I'm terribly sorry, I'll make sure my next story makes more sense... no, that's not how you spell sense .. there we go." Smirking, Flarey clicked "Post". She was replying to her Stories From Study thread after a member had commented on her work. It was almost funny really - she'd warned them that it would be random, it wouldn't necessarily make sense, and she'd assumed that they knew it wasn't some serious Charles Dickens-like novel all in one storyline with openings and beginnings, all making perfect and audible sense.

Humming a segment from "Colors of the Wind" from the Disney movie Pocahontas, Flarey wondered what to do with herself. It was a Monday afternoon, but it was the sort that felt more like a Sunday night, or a Thursday evening. Nobody was online Skype for her to talk to, and she had no homework to do.

"Guess I'll add some sort of story to that thread.." she murmured, going back into Psypoke.

You have no new messages

"Heh, ain't that the story of my life." Laughing, Flarey ignored the sad message at the top of the screen and entered Mossdeep City, looking for inspiration for a story.

"Whatcha doin?" a mischievous came from behind her.
"I'm gonna write something for the Stories from Study thread." she replied, still browsing the Team forum.
"How boring." Slinking out from underneath her beanbag, the little golden animal yawned. He was the size of a large cat and was covered in silky gold fur, with pale mauve stripes on his long, thick tail. Folded neatly on his back, his powerful blue wings rustled quietly as he stretched, showing off his purple-tipped paws and sharp claws. As he moved to sit next to her, he twitched his long, furry ears and yawned again, revealing his light pink tongue and small white fangs.

"So, why are you doing that?" the creature asked her, peering over her knee at the screen on the laptop.

"Heh, I'm bored. You know Will goes back to school this week, so I have nobody to talk to at this time of day."
Will was a close online friend of hers, who lived in England.
"Aww, you can talk to me?" Smiling sweetly, the creature nosed her leg softly. Flarey laughed.
"You're such an attention seeker, Lip."

The little golden creature smirked and shook his head. His name was Lippie, and indeed he was not anything like what could be normally seen in this world. He was a Realmen, a creature from another world, in another reality - a world called the Realms of Imagination. Lippie was a qualified and registered conscience, and he was supposed to be Flarey's conscience - but in reality all he did was cause mischief and play jokes on people.

Pausing in her typing, Flarey yawned. Watching her, Lippie smiled.
"You stayed up late talking to-"
"Yeah." Interrupting him, Flarey continued to watch the computer screen, her face expressionless. Smiling to himself, Lippie climbed into her lap and curled up, watching as the girl continued to type away at her latest story for her fiction thread.


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lol, good work. It would do you a lot of good to focus your writign talent on a full story rather than random entries like this... I guess that's your descision, but if you wrote an actual planned out storyI think it would turn out great.


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Lol, I love these real-life with a twist stories, personally XD

[color=mediumpurple]Looking around the computer centre, Flarey wondered what to do just as the staff room door in front of her opened. Turning back to her computer, Flarey jumped as a green-sleeved arm descended in front of her face carrying a small box of assorted candies.



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ZOMG BUMP LOL!!!1!!!1!!!1!!1shift+1

Yeah. I've been feeling like writing again lately, although with nothing to write. So, rather than starting a new Thread, I'm just gonna Double Necromance Post Bump Thing and revive this one into oblivion :P

So let's go! I don't know what to write, so I'll write anything! Haha!


My heart is full and my door's always open, you come any time you want... As usual, the lyrics made her smile.

"I don't mind spending every day, out on the corner in the pouring rain..."
It was raining now. It had been for a few days, and the ground was soaked. That was alright, though. They'd been in a dought, so any rain was welcome. And she did like the rain - that pitter patter sound was comforting to her...

...pitter patter pitter patter...

I don't mind spending very day out on your corner in the pouring rain...


Her name was Ashley. Well, her human name. She'd kept that secret for ages, tried not to let anyone find out. Of course he had found out. He knew too much about her. Yet he didn't even know her - the true her. Only a few people did. Nobody would believe it - it was funny, so many of the humans knew, and none of them believed. Her best friend ever had heard her conscinece for himself, and yet, as he said in his cute American accent - "It's not logical."

So nobody knew. She told people, and they didn't believe her. She couldn't show anyone in real life - they'd take her away, cut her up, or darkmind knows what else. At the use of the Realmen expression, she smiled. Humans didn't use those either. Nobody did. But that was alright - she was unique that way.

And who knows? Maybe one day, she'd tell them all her story...


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Impressive. The most impressive. Just what I would expect from you. :wink:

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Intriguing and somehow beautifully mysterious. Just like the author. :wink:

It was really interesting. You should post more of that one, Flarey.

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they're good flarey


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I was gonna post this last Friday, but tie me up and call me a Moderator if the internet wasn't down >.< So, here it is now - better late than never, right?

22 September wrote:
Thankyou ladies and gentlement! Lol I'm in such a hyper mood :) Makes quite the pleasant change, really, I've been depressed more often than not lately.

Giggling shrilly, Flarey clicked open Gmail again, wriggling in her seat. She was utterly hyperactive, and as such was finding everything three times as funny.

"Nyeeaarrghchghkshghchhh.. Hehe! I made a plane noise!" Giggling and tapping in a reply to the conversation she was having with her friend, Flarey looked around as a teacher walked past her computer.

"Hehehe, apert.. oh, good job downie ... downie downie downie.. hehehe..." Talking to herself cheerfully, she corrected the typo she'd made, mispelling "Part" as "aPert" and then as "Aprt" before finally getting it right.

She was at school, in Ancient History. Despite her mischievous warnings to her teacher, he had booked them into a computer lesson second last period on Friday. Of course nobody could stay focused on the work.

"I don't understand why the page died..." Flarey's friend Kate was on the computer next to her - and it had frozen.
"Why did it die..??" Kate whined.
"Because... of the giant African snails.." Flarey said seriously.
"Your face is a giant African snail!" Kate cried.
"No, your mom is a giant African snail!!"

And both collapsed in peals of laughter.


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I wonder who the new Elinints are gonna be. Great job there, keep up the good work. ;)

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Alright, alright, I'll update, Ziva. Just for you, lol. Although I dunno what I'll update with... Oh, I know. I'll do a sort of "Who Am I" type thing for a few of my Guardians. Or I can get them to do it themselves. Either works :P I dedicate this update to you, Ziva. :P

I am the Guardian of Body and Mind in the Realms, a job which consists of ensuring the balance between the two. Learned in physics, biology (including both human and Realmen anatomy) and advanced mathematics, I have been referred to as the "intelligent" one. I have spent a few months in the human realms, in an area known as Asia, because of my appearance. The reasons for my journey to the human realms I am instructed not to divulge.

My personality has been described as being "cool, calm and collected". I rarely display heightened emotions of any sort, and prefer to keep my head in any situation. I see little point in becoming overly excited for small things, and little use in letting negativity overtake my thinking in bad situations. I am expressly a being of logic, and prefer to think things out carefully and plan before acting.

Most recently I have been working with my collegues on the new plans for the Realms which the Creator has designed. As Guardian of Body and Mind, I have to ensure that the new citizens are stable and physically well. One of the new States will have a new type of citizen, so I am studying carefully to ensure that my knowledge does not lack in that area.


I think I'll just do two today. That should be interesting enough, until next time. I think you'll guess that one - and the next one - fairly easily, Ziva :wink:

I am the second newest Guardian - the Guardian of Medical Science and Health. I control the major diseases and infections in the Realms to ensure that they cause no major harm. If any sort of breakout occurs, it is my job to stop it spreading, and to ensure that the affects are small.

Although I am a new Guardian, I have already had several large assignments. There has been two severe epidemics of Realm Plague since I began, and I have had to stop both from spreading. Both times, the Plague was able to be stopped, luckily.

I am usually mature and level-minded, but I can be quite immature under certain influences. I find it easier to follow set rules and instructions, but it seems I can be influenced away from them every once and then. Although I am rarely around and spend most of my time in my laboratory in the Palace, I often work closely with James, as our Guarded areas are very close. I try to keep things organized, but often things get out of hand.


If we liked getting to know these two, I'll add in some more later on, ok? :wink:


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The Realms are becoming more crowded now. :P

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They sound interesting, wouldnt mind meeting more. :)

Very nice. I think you called them both Ziva though? Isnt the medical one Glia? I may be wrong. V_V

EDIT: Im wrong, Gardevoir corrected me...

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I think you called them both Ziva though?

Ziva is the nickname Flarey gave Galar. Apparently, she reminds her of the character from NCIS. :P

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Just for me? :oops: That's so cute ;_______;

<3 Glia <3 James

Keep it up!

And yes, Flarey told me I remind her of this Ziva character from that series. GO, LATINS! o/

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