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<center>Intro:</center>
Yup another fanfic by me, I don't know why but my fanfic seem to die after a while... I'll try to keep this one alive. But this pokemon fanfic is a little more mature. If ESRB read this im sure they'd rate it T, for violence, suggetsive themes and comic mischeif... So if your younger than 13 you might want to just click the link to the fan fiction forum.

<center>Characters:</center>
I don't really want to describe my characters in the middle of the story, so I'm editing this section as the charaters join the story. So far the characters are:

Ray A.K.A Shadow
Age: 17
Height: 6 ft. 2 in.
Weight: 124 lbs.

Appearance:
Blonde hair, green eyes, pale.
Wears a black cloak, with dark blue pants and a black shirt under the cloak.

Personality:
Shy, doesn't like too much attention, and really hates getting any form of special treatment. He just wants to be like everyone else.

Pokemon:
{umbreon} Night

Anne
Age: 16
Height: 5 ft. 6 in.
Weight: refuses to reveal

Appearance:
Redish brown hair, blue eyes, pale.
Wears, a red shirt with a long white skirt, usually has ribbons in her hair.

Persoanlity:
Very outgoing, but doesn't like having to stay in one spot, and likes to explore.

King Frund
Age: ???
Height: 7 ft. 9 in.
Weight: 203 lbs.

Appearance:
White hair, black eyes, has a tan.
Wear a long red an gold coat with a white suit under it.

Personality:
Mean, and old fashioned, preferres to stay shut off from the rest of the world.

Pokemon:
{tyranitar} Tyranitar
{charizard} Charizard
{sceptile} Sceptile
{feraligator} Feraligator
{dragonite} Dragonite
{metagross} Metagross

<center>Chapter 1: Plans of Escape</center>
In the middle of the forbidden ocean, lies a little island, with rapids all around it, this remote island was known as Shawlo Kingdom. The kingdom was ruled by a tyrant king named Frund, who before was a peicful man, until the day his wife, Quenn Isibelle, died giving birth to their son, Ray. The kingdom was still peaceful though more people and more people became poor. The kingdom was about to face it's end...

"Ray." said someone, "Wake up Ray." they said, Ray oppened his eyes to see Anne standing next to his bed with a tray with breakfast on it. Ray sat up, "Anne you know you don't have to bring me breakfast..." he said, Anne smiled, "I felt like cooking so here it is." she said holding out the tray or Ray. Ray sighed, "Okay." and took the tray and placed it on the table next to his bed, "Do you want to share?" he asked pouring some of the orange juice in a jug into a glass. "No, I've already eaten." she replied, Ray smiled, "You excpect me to eat all of this?" he said, "Well when you put it that way why spoil perfectly good food." Anne said. Ray moved over a little so Anne could sit next to him.

After they ate, Anne got up and took the tray out of the room. Ray sat there is silence, thinking about the plane he had been making to escape the island. Then a Umbreon walked over to his bed, "Night, did you have a good sleep?" asked Ray, the Umbreon nodded lightly. Night had been ray's loyal pokemon since birth, and they were inseperable.

And Anne walked in the room with a bowl of pokemon food, she put it down in front of Night, "There you go Night." she said smiling. Anne looked at Ray who was starig down at the stone floor, "What's wrong?" she asked, "I'm leaving Anne." he replied, she was confused "Leaving?" she said. "The Island, I'm leaving today." he said then getting up from the bed. "What do you mean???" Anne asked "The island is surrounded by rapids!" she said. "Not totally..." Ray said going over too a window and looking down at the roaring ocean.
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So what do you guys think so far? I hope you like it.


Sat Sep 10, 2005 9:49 am
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Pretty nice. I'll keep an eye open, I'd like to see where this goes


Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:03 am
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Thanx, I'll post chapter 2 whenever I finish it... XD


Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:53 pm
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What a great begnning!! I really wanna noe what happens next!!!

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:D :D 8.5/10 :D :D

P.S I've just posted up my new chpater of the "Loss" and "pokemon meet Cactuar and Tonberry!!!"

Plz reply on each giving comment and score plz!!! THX!!

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