Here's and attempt by me at a little Fanfic. So, here goes:

Chapter One: It Begins

A lone man strolled into the city. He looked up for a second at the sign that hung limply from the arch he entered through. It read "Welcome to Saffron City!" He chuckled and continued his slow walk to the center of town. He was a pale man, in bleak contrast with his dark suit, but he did not look out of place in the drab city. On his belt were three pok

Very interesting so far- I don't follow many long-running fanfictions, but I think I'll keep my eye on this. The foreshadowing of a Dark Secret™ was a little strong, making me worry this could become a Gary Stu, but so far it's quite well written and the setting is a nice break from the stuff I'm writing and similar stories I'll look forwards to chapter 2.

ooohh,i like the bad guys

good/great

I liked it.Mainly because it sounds similar to the Pokemon series I'm working on.One of the main characters, Gaven-how can I put this(you can tell by that that I don't talk about my stories very often)was a former Rocket, but here's the twist.There was no other choice!Let me explain.His family is rich & he to control the fortune when he was older, but-do I need to go on at what happens?Luckily, he gets a chance & races off.Here's the second twist: the mother who decides to tkae him in is the main characters'(Brittancia, Angela & Lumines's)mom!Strange coincidence.

Nice stuff, Undeadcutlet! I like your writing style and the story has me hooked already. I'll be following it faithfully!

Well there is one problem... I began writing this months ago and I don't know if I'll have the inspiration to continue it. I might make a one week poll to see who wants me to continue this story...

Well,you saw it.It is 100% that every1 wants you to continue.

It hasn't been one week yet and only 3 people have voted, but I think I'll continue it anyway. Hopefully the next chapter'll be up tomorrow.

EDIT: I'll be adding each chapter to my first post to make your reading more easy and pleasurable. I might, occasionally, also post to say that the new chapter is up.

EDIT2: Well, Chapter 2 is up earlier than expected.

This is awesome! Giovanni the 2nd...how cool...

Chapter 3 is up, hope you like it.

long yet interesting its nice