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 A Journy Of A Great Trainer... 
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Once upon a time, there was a boy named Isaac. Isaac Loved pokemon ever since he was Born! When he was born, His mother was beside him, with a newly born Azurill. Ever since then, He always played with azurill. Now, he is 14, with a Azumarill beside him. Isaac was born in Lilycove. And there, at age 10 he started his journy with Marill. His Azurill evolved into a marill while he was playing with him at age 7. Marilll Evolved into a Azumarill When Isaac was 11, fighting Wallace. Right now, He is at Johto, at goldenrod city. He Won at the pokemon leage at Kanto and Hoene. Now he is facing johto. He keeps Azumarill in every region he goes, but the rest of the pokemon he caught, he leaves it to Professor. Birch.
------------------------------------Chapter 1--------------------------------------
Isaac was tired from battling many trainers. He went to the pokemon center for the night. when he came out of the shower and went to watch t.v at the pokemon center, he saw his hero, Drake. Isaace always like drake so much because he seen many of his battles. He especially liked his Salamence. On the t.v, Drake was battling some boy. The boy used Blizzard with his Dewgon. Drake's last remaining Salamence fainted. Isaace was shocked. The first time he saw Drake lost. His heart broke. He dropped His coffe and fell side ways on the couch he was sitting on...
-----------------------------------Chapter 2---------------------------------------
Isaac ran away from the pokemon center. He knows he is acting like a foolish baby just cuz some trainer lost. (heck yet, the narrator is laughing too lol) Isaac always thought bout drake when he lost, and thinked what drake would do if he lost...
As isaac ran away, he bumped into a girl in a dark cloak.
"im..im very sorry..mam'......" croaked Isaac. His throat was dry.
"its ok...i know drake lost and u are sad" said the mysterius girl.
"how--how did you---"
" look, if you wanna feel better lets have a battle"
Isaac had a battle with the girl.
it was a double battle..Isaac used Azumarill and Snorlax. The mysterios girl used a Claydol and a Fearow. Isaac used ice beam wiht Azumarill at Fearow. Fearow dogded it, and used HyperBeam at Snorlax. Snorlax was only left with Half of his HP. Snorlax used Rest to full his hp up. Claydol used earthquake. BUT! it was a critical hit. Azumarill was left with 57/279.
Snorlax Fainted. Isaac was shocked..
"No...now drake is gone...and im failing..you win...."
"STOP! This batttle is to teach that you can do anything, wihtout some trainer you think is good"
she was right: Isaac kept thinking for something...
Azumarill used icebeam at fearow and fainted.
"Yes! 1 hit and K-O,althoguh thats for sheaear cold...."
Claydol used antoher earthQuake. Azumarill Jumped, and used hydro pump. Unfortunitly, claydol did a hyperbeam back. Azumarill dodged it and the hydro pump and hyperbeam left.azumarill ran to claydol before claydol knew it, and azumarill did a hydropump. claydol was pushed into the treees and fainted. it was a critical hit..
"good job, boy" said the mysterios girl
"thanks, now i dont have to depend on drake."
"see you at the johto pokemon league, boy"
then the girl left. the NExt morning Isaac took out his Charizard and flew to Blackthorn City. There, he went to challenge for his last badge..[Note: Isaac was in goldenrod city only for battling trainers]
-------------------------------------Chapter 3-------------------------------------
Isaac knocked out clair very easly: He used charazard's dragonclaw against all the dragon pokemon that clair used. Althoguh Her Kingdra was too fast and did hydropump first. But, he used azumarill and used return, very affected because Azumarill loved Isaac more than some regular best friend-ship. As Isaac went on the boat to the pokemon league, he was very happy. He worked so hard, and he is competing at his 3rd pokemon league. As he was on the boat, he was at his room, watching t.v. Then, Suddenly, the Boat started shaking. The Emergency Alert started. Isaac grabbed all his stuff and ran to the middle of the boat, where there was activities, a big T.V, and people on couches talking. It was like the living room for the boat. Isaac dashed to those big windows and he looked outside. the shaking stoped..then a big CLASH of water came and knocked the boat side ways. the windo was the cealing now.
"Go charizard" yelled Isaac.
"Go Alakazam!"
"Charizard, use fireblast at the window. Alakazam, use protect on me , u , and charizard". Alakazam hesitated:he didnt know how to protect others. but he tried, and it was a sucess: the two pokemon and Isaac had a forcefield aroudn them. Charizard used fireblast, and broke the window. the glasss shattered and spread all over. the Protect protected them. Isaac returned Alakazam, and wented on charizard. He told charizard to fly, and then they went out of the window. they were in the air, and everyone from the boat was on emergency safty boats. There were so many people just under him. Isaac and charizard flew where he saw the big tsunami. as he got closer, he didnt believe his eyes: Lugia, getting out of the water. and a little big front of him and above him a little, was Ho-oh. Then a Big battle has started.
-------------------------------------CHapter 4-------------------------------------
Ho-oh used sacred fire and burned up the sea. Lugia flew up and did a extrememly big XL(extra large) hydro pump that made the sea blow up. the world was turning into chaos. isaac told them to stop fighting, but they wouldnt listen of course. so then he yelled so loud, then boht ho-oh and lugia did sacred fire and aeroblast together, and charizard dogde but it hit Isaac. isaac fell and drowned deep in the water. Ho-oh and lugia was very ashamed.also, the beam that both pokemon did hit the sea so badly that the water also drowned charizard. what will happen to charizard and isaac?
------------------------------------Final Chapter...--------------------------------
A few days later Lugia And Ho-oh was sad. Isaac never came up. But Charizard did after the beam. He flew to a sacred temple where ho-oh was, and ho-oh fed him and kept him alive. Deep In the Water, Isaac was gone. Nothing was left from him. Lugia checked, and those were the results.
So, antoher few days pasted, and mew appeared in front of lugia and ho-oh. he was carrying Isaac. Isaac was drowning and mew saved him. Mew took him to a sacred realm with tons of other mews. THe mew wiht him was Isaacs now, because mew said it will be with isaac throughout his journey.as lugia dived away and ho-oh brought charizard back, Isaac headed to the pokemon league. There he fought a verystrong trainer, named ash. Althoguh his mew was the key to his victory, he will enver forget his johto journey.


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Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:14 pm
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Nice, good short first chapter to set us off.

6.5/10

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Very nice. I like it, but it is a bit choppy. Try to elaborate your story with more detail. 7/10.

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SwellowLuvr wrote:
Very nice. I like it, but it is a bit choppy. Try to elaborate your story with more detail. 7/10.

you will see alot more details in the next chapter, like what he is doing, ect..and moredetail at the next next chapter , ect.
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