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I will add more parts for this story so dont keep waiting :wink:
Once upon a time there was a pokemon,a white bird pokemon with the power to control,Ice,Water and Air.
In the middle ages people called this pokemon Lugor as in"guardian of the seas"
Lugor as now they call Lugia had a battle a long time ago with the pokemon of disaster Inishida as now they call him Absol.
The catastrophy pokemon "Absol" has beaten Lugia and send him to the frozen Alima lake.
Alima lake was a lake with ice a lake that is cold that a creature in the water there freezes into a huge Ice cube,that is what happened to lugia.


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Lintaro, this is the best story I've ever read.

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I can't wait for more exciting adventures with Lugia.

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This story literally blew me away. It's like Star Wars Episode III; you walk away saying wow. I mean seriously, WOW. Jeez, write some more! I can't wait for the next chapter.


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that was so beautiful :cry:

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Wow thanks! :D
As lugia was frozen during the years,he began to search for power!
Then at one night a man crawls in the shadows,waiting for anyone to make a move,suddenly.....go {umbreon} and {espeon} !!!
The man called out his pokemon,then officer jenny came she battles him with her charizard!
Espeon use psychic!!!Umbreon use shadow ball!!!!
Charizard couldnt make a move with umbreons and espeons combination attack!
Then a kid comes,hey you!
The kid takes out his grovyle and steps into action.
Grovyle leaf blade!
Grovyle done some serius damage on umbreon!
Espeon use psychic!
Espeon did super effective damage on Grovyle since he is a grass type!!
No Grovyle!
He he you dont have what it takes kid!
Suddenly.........strange winds came blowing right to the man!
Perfect,my prize Absol!
As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued-


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Instant best seller!

Wow. Just OMG blew my mind!

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Event better than the last one, I give it 5/5

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Leona, only a 5/5? I'd easily give this an 8/5, maybe even a 9/5! Keep up the great work!

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Lintaro wrote:

As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued-


Oh man! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!


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Amphy wrote:
Lintaro wrote:

As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued-


Oh man! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!


I know man. The suspense is just killing me!

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WoW AMAZING keep the story coming Lintaro

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Yeah, this story is just amazing! Please, I need to hear more!

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well i joined psypoke for the pokedex, but the stories are awsome too :D
seems that the people at the top of the pokemon universe should hire some kids like this to write pokemon movies, and not those cheesy hollywood weirdos!


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OH... MY... GOD. I love this story. This story has to be the most exciting thing I have ever read in my lifetime.

And the second part?! BLEW ME AWAY! All I can say is wow, dude.


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The razor winds were to powerful leaving the man with serius damage!
GRRRR....I will get you Absol {absol} -lutly I will get you!
Then the man escaped leaving no trail.
Meanwhile at Alima lake Lugia wanted power and more power but he fails to get out of the icecube.
That evening Absol finds itself at the mountains,.......woooosh!
Latios and Latias apeared!
Latias:dont dare you amke catastrophies!
Absol:hm............
Absol charged its razor wind and charged into action!
Latios:look out latias!
Latias:argghhh I'm hit!
Absol used tornado,as the the tornado stroke the mountain began to broke! -to be continued!-


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This story just gets better and better, you are the next Stephan King! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:

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wow the character development is amazing. i didn't known that latias and latios were such great compatriots lookin out for each other like that.

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God...It's....it's.....it's....There are no words to describe it!...It's soo good!


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You could have a career doing this in later life. J.k Rowling has nothing on you Lintaro! & you're so fast at it too :D

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man, this is the best story ever. i'm gonna check all the time! I LURVE YOU!


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This is.. amazing. I mean, the imagery, it's stunning. I feel like I'm living this story; like I'm right there with them all. The way you've used the written word, the power of it all... I'm stunned, at a loss for words. This is, undoubtedly, one of the best stories I've ever heard. You NEED to publish this.

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You have a gift. An incredible gift for writing. The suspense, the drama, the imagery. Definatly 200% material. The personification, this story reeks of greatness.


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cmon!!!keep going...continue the story!!gwaaa..im getting bored waiting for the end...but nice story anyway.. :D :D :twisted:

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Dude this story is so awesome, that when I read it I just went "Wow". Then I exploded because of the awesomeness that this story contains.

Lintaro, you are my hero!

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