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One thing very few people know about me (and even fewer on this website) know about me is that I'm an avid songwriter. Age old story of someone with big dreams but is starting out small. Bu anyway this is the first song I wrote back in my freshman year of high school. It's called Shooting Star. I wrote it about this one girl.
Lookin’ at the night sky
I wonder why
We are looking for shooting stars
I mean, we have each other
Both of our wishes have already come true
And we don’t need no fancy rings or cars
Never the less, the sky’s so pretty
You can’t enjoy this beauty in the city
But the stars don’t compare
When we look at each other and stare

You shine so bright in the moonlight
And you glow in the daylight
You give me the strength and courage to carry on
You’re optimistic and carefree
And beautiful, obviously
You make the world brighter wherever you are
Your my shooting star

Forget about worries
For you that comes so easily
No need to hurry
Slow down, enjoy the scenery
To tell you the truth I can’t enjoy it as much as I enjoy you
Your radiance is abundant even when the day is through

You shine so bright in the moonlight
And you glow in the daylight
You give me the strength and courage to carry on
You’re optimistic and carefree
And beautiful, obviously
You make the world brighter where ever you are
Your my shooting star

You’ve granted my every wish
laughter, serenity, happiness
A shooting star can’t hold a candle to you
You shine brighter than the sun, yes you do

You shine so bright in the moonlight
And you glow in the daylight
You give me the strength and courage to carry on
You’re optimistic and carefree
And beautiful, obviously
You make the world brighter where ever you are
Your my shooting star
You shine so bright in the moonlight
And you glow in the daylight
You give me the strength and courage to carry on
You’re optimistic and carefree
And beautiful, obviously
You make the world brighter where ever you are
Your my shooting star

Make a wish
Cuz mine has already come true
Thanks to you....

Hope you guys liked it. Tell me what you think. Any comments, compliments, advice, anything is appreciated. Just as long as it's not hurtful. I'm all good with constructive critisism I know I'm not perfect. Thanks for reading.


Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:17 pm
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These lyrics are great. I'm no music critic, but most songs right now have barely any lyrics (and when there are there are often only a couple of lines). I wish I could listen to this to the actual music...

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Mon Jul 30, 2012 6:37 pm
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Thank you. Yeah eventually if I can get some music to go with the songs I write that'd be great but I don't really have any music programs on my computer or anything so I don't know where I would start. I'll try to figure something out.


Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:36 am
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This is beautiful. I may be young and the stereotype for my age is to like songs full of vulgarity or no lyrics but I miss the songs of the 1980s where they have lyrics of love and actually mean something instead of crap like 'Bangarang' or 'Shots'

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