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 The Raven House Incident 
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It's the begining of another year at Gears University, a school where people go to learn how to train mechs, large robots used most commonly for war, though there are some other tasks they fullfill in peacetime. There are ten different sleeping quarters, and they all have names from animals. After a few days of classes, Raven house people begin to become withdrawn, moving to class quickly and returning to the house just as fast. Rumors are spread, and when a war breaks out that requires the assistence of the more experienced students, the Raven house members that remain are still staying withdrawn. When there is a spike in stealings of parts from the repair station, the police and repair station interns learn first and link that with the Ravens. A few students(RPers) venture out to spy on Raven house and solve this mystery!

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Name:
Age:(Though you will be a first year, people may join at varying ages. Preferably below 30 and above 18)
House: (Wolf, Lion, Tiger, Bear, Hawk, Eagle, Snake, Monkey, Dragon, Raven. If you really want to be in Raven house, PM me and I'll think about it.)
Internship:(Hospital, Repair Center, Construction Center, Museum, Police, Mecharoni Pizza. Because the Repair station intern has a special role, you will have to be more experienced in RPing to fulfill this.)
Appearence:
History:


My character:

Name: DX
Age: 20
House: Hawk
Internship: Police
Appearence
Minus the medival-ish clothing
History: Grew up on a farm, family saved up since when they learned his mother was pregnant so he could go to a higher school. The idea of opperating a mech had always been facinating to him, so he choose to go to Gears Univgersity. He also seeks to send back money for his family once he has a career.

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:48 am
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Name: Collin Ralston
Age: 21
House: Eagle
Internship: Hospital
Apperance : http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t26/ ... school.png
History: Lived in a above middle class family. His parents were always going on and on about how fun he would have at Gears University.His mother always was teling here friends how clever he is and how he wants to become a Neurosurgeon. They were deliberating on whether they were going to send him to Gears but the all agreed that I might not be the best in the state but it was the best one for Collin plus his mother and father had met there so his father thought it was a good idea. His parent promised him that if he came back with good enough results hey would buy him his first car that he had wanted since he passed his test (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... e_1984.jpg).

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:15 am
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Name: Angelo Silver
Age: 23
House: Wolf,
Internship: Museum.
Appearence: Image but without the bow.
History: Has lived in a below middle class family and has always been intelligent. he has always wanted to go to gears university but couldn't because his family was borderline poor. but because he was an exceptional student he recieved a full scolership (spelled how?) and is now going to gears university to fufill his love of knoledge.

btw everything but the history has been taken off of my mechquest charicter :lol:


Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:41 am
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Name JBA
Age 20
House Snake
Internship Mecharoni Pizza
apperance tall blond hair Wares glasses
History: Lived in a big city parents did not have much money so he worked at a pizza place for 10 Years yes they accepted a 10 year old to work Got money and went to Gears

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 8:01 am
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Hyperjack: Accepted.

Angelo Chronus: Hmm...I've seen your RPing, and it makes me want to turn you away. However, I will give you benefit of the doubt for now. But be careful. I'm a grammer freak. Keep that in mind.

Sonic Josh: You seem to be new, so I'm reluctant, but like Angelo, I'll give you benefit of the doubt. However, I expect much better grammer than that. I don't expect perfection, but a least make an attempt.

We can start now, we have enough people. I will accept two more, should they request.

***

DX brought the last of his bags downstairs, by the door. He proceeded to begin carrying these items out by the road, his parents helping. Once everything was ready, his parents hugged him.

"Good luck at Gears, honey. Call us when you get there." His mom said.

"I will."

Just then, a large ship hovered above them. A few small mechs began loading things onto the ship. Soon, everything was in, and an elavator like structure came down. DX stepped in, waved goodbye, and was brought into the ship.

Inside, it was very open, other soon-to-be students walking around. DX was welecomed by the captain and then told to go to the back of the ship.

DX smiled. It was time for his time as a student of Gears University to begin.

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 1:27 pm
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((Yes sir! -salutes- and btw it's Chronos. Like father time))

-Gives my luggage to the Mechs then steps onto the ship-
It's great that I can go to gears but............ I wish mom and dad could have been here. -As I step in i am welcomed by the captain and also directed to the back of the ship- Well no turning back now.... -As I walk back i run into another student- Oh sorry sir -bows- I am Angelo what is your name?


Wed Oct 01, 2008 1:36 pm
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(Where is that thing?) Collin thought to himself. He had been waiting for ages. He was all packed up. Everything ready to go. He was nervous, twitching. Hs parents were both there waiting for him to go. It was late and he was getting worried. He kept checking outside to see whether it was there. He drank now 4 cups off coffee waiting for the ship. "I am sure it will be here soon" his mother kept saying. He took out his mobile (Nokia N93) to check to see if he had any messages or missed calls. Nothing... then a massive shadow came over the house. It was here.

"Cya!" Collin shouted to his parents and the cat, Natty. He stepped aboard and was amazed to see a massive spacious and modern ship that looked like it had just jumped out of IKEA it was fabulous.

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 1:56 pm
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DX chuckled.

"I'm DX. Nice to meet you. What year will this be for you? It's my first."

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:24 pm
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Nice to meet you too! This is my first year here also and I don't know anyone.........


Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:50 pm
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(Wow this is amazing) Ring Ring the caller id came up with mom. God already, what had I forgot? She could not have been ringing to see how I was surely “Hello?" Collin uttered. "Hello Dear, How’s the ship?" his mother said "Mom I have just this minute got on you can't possibly be missing me already?" Collin snapped "Well I am, I was just wondering. Is this not the right time to ring then?" Collin’s mother asked "It seems a lit bit paranoid maybe ring me later, kay?" "Okay dear (to husband) Trevor did I leave the stove on at home)" "Mom I heard that, you have not cooked since 1987" "Ha Ha funny (sarcastic) anyway dear I will ring you later bye *hangs up*... (God mothers)

Collin walked around the corner and saw these two people standing there. He recognised one of them. (Oh god it is that really geeky kid at school who follows me around Umm... Angelo I think it is... yeah that’s right. Who's that? Could Angelo possibly have friends...No. Well I suppose I might as well say Hi) "Hi Angelo...Oh Hi who are you? Aren’t you that kid whose dad owns that farm that won the Farm Of Year Award 07 yeah I saw it in the paper. Your name is umm. JX yeah JX."

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Wed Oct 01, 2008 11:25 pm
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-Glares at him muttering under his breath- "it's that braindead jock JBC. What the heck is he doing here?" -Turns back to DX ignoring him- So where are you from?


Thu Oct 02, 2008 8:08 am
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"Excuse me I said Hello..." Colin said. Then he sood in front of Angelo and said "Any way where are you from?"

OOC: My Chararcter is very smart please keep in character

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 8:37 am
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-Glares at him again- Mecha City.

OOC: yeah and mine didn't know yours before now so please keep in chararcter


Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:03 am
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OOC: I did know that yours was smart btw

I didn't ask you

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:35 am
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humph. -turns away and looks out of the window of the ship- everything looks so small from up here.....


Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:17 pm
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"Yeah, It is a long way down. Parachuting and Sky Diving would be fun from up here." *Rumble Rumble* "God I am hungary anyone want a bite to eat? Or maybe we could have a look around this thing."

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"well I'm off to gears university now mum dad bye" chucks his things at the mechas
"have fun ok" say JBA's mum and dad at the same time
"I will" He says And walks on to the ship

Well Who to go and talk to i wonder JBA thinks to him self
Oh over there those people look nice.

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OOC: Guys, when somebody is talking, use quotation marks. And setences end in periods.

"It's DX. Yeah, he did win that. Oh, I think I forgot to have breakfast. I think there's a foodcourt on the upper floor."

DX walked upstairs and looked around. Sure enough, there was a Moonbucks. Perfect. DX hurried over and ordered a cup of coffee. He then walked over to the donut shop and got a crea filled donut. He sat down and began eating.

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Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:51 pm
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(Wow that was quick somes hungary)"I am just gonna grab a cup of coffee and a muffin I will be back in a second."

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Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:34 am
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Runs Over and gets to moonbucks before collin

Gets a Cup of tea and walks over to collin
"Hi my names Josh But i like to be called JBA whats your name?"

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OOC: I mean it, Sonic Josh. Watch the grammer. Setences end in periods, and setences have two parts: A subject and a predicate. Basically, a setneces must include both the person or thing that is doing something and what they're doing. Last warning.

DX finished the donut, then began drinking his coffee. Moonbucks sure made good coffee.

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*Tuts* (Geek) "...Hi am Collin could you move *moves looking scared* thank you" Collin said (R*tard...how rude) Collin moved and sat down with the others. "So what do ya wanna do?"

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"Well, this shouldn't take too long. I just need to eat."

As he said this, the captain's voice came over the room.

"We are coming in for a landing, but are experiencing some technical difficulties. we have put up shields around everybody just in case. Expect some bumpiness."

Meanwhile...

"Hmm..." The Gears University headmaster said. "The angle of that ship is a bit off..."

CRASH

The passengers fell around the landing area, protected by the force fields.

"Please leave the area and make your way to the shuttle ship, which will take you to the University."

DX did so. Great, another ship ride. Hopefully we'll have a better piolet now.

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Oh he's a nice guy. Jba thought to himself "that's very hot" said JBA as the tea spills over him.

OCC if i go it won't make much of a differnce at the moment

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*Shaking*"Bl**dy Hell What is going on here? Let get going quickly!"

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