One of the summer assignments for my English course next year is to write a good prologue from which we have a story planned out. This is what I came up with in the middle of the night, the working title for the story being "The Face of Earth." Hope you enjoy. =]

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Prologue

I'm an absolute maniac when it comes to grammar/punctuation so this will be long, bear with me.



This could be better, you could add a little more description and change it to something like, '...the front door was broken in half, blood slowly dripped down the mahogany frame.' It

uhh... yeah... what he said. How ever I think this would make a good story, just ease up on the carnage, your going for a shock and awe effect and it doesn't suit you. but I incourage and dare you to build on this story