((You and John [CHARIZARDDRAKE] are battling. then i ran up to where you guys are. im being chased by a hunter, who wants to steal my Absol, since it is a rare poke. so i sent my umbreon out to battle.))

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"Okay Charizard, wait untill his Cloyster's protect wears off, then use Flamethrower! And if it tries to attack you, then evade and use Seisemic Toss!"

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"Cloyster, hold on to the protect as long as you can!"
The shiny pokemon started shaking, then it's shell colapsed open with a clank.
"Cloyster, use barrier! Watch out for the Charizard!"

I returned my umbreon and continued running. i ran through the battle, but i got hit with a flamethrower, and fell to the ground, nearly unconcsience. My Absol.... i thought must protect my absol...and i blacked out.

"STOP!"
I ran over to the burned person and shook him a little bit. I winced as a spike poked my knee as I was kneeling.
"Get over here, he needs some help!"
"Can you hear me?" I said to the burned boy.

"the hunter..." i whispered. the boy turned around. Tyranitar was standing right in front of us.

"Charizard! use your Sceisemic Toss on the Tiranitar!!"

I watch as my black Charizard takes Tiranitar and flies up with it in his arms. Then Charizard speeds at the ground with tremedous speed. It let's the Tiranitar go and it flies back up. Charizard then speeds at the ground again, and while the Tiranitar gets up, Charizard realeses a huge ball of fire at the Tiranitar. it then falls over once more and faints.
"Yeah! Way to go!" I shout to Charizard.
I call back my Charizard and run over to the fainted person. I check his pulse and listen to his breathing.
"Andy!! You and I need to get him to the nearest Pokemon center! They can help him!" Andy and I lift the man up and run out of the mountain side.

Lucky for the man, a Pokemon center was just on the other side of the valley that they ran through. We past an unusual clump of bushes as we run, but I don't stop to think twice about this; after all we do have a crisis on our hands. Together, Andy and I ran into the Pokemon Center and I tell the nurse what happpend.
"He got hit by my Charizard's Flamethrower!! He needs treatment now!!"

"Okay!'

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((Aside from mass confusion, this going quite well. I'm gunna change my last relpy, I was typing it when Charzard posted.

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"I hope that man's okay." I stroked his Absol on the head. "I wish I hurt that hunter too. But, I had to give him to Officer Jenny." I look up at Andy. He has a upset look on his face.

"It seems like there wasn't enough reason to be chasing that kid just to get his absol," I said, noticing his studying expression. "I mean, why couldn't he just have offered to trade? It doesn't add up."

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I came out of the room, sore and wrapped in bandages, but still OK. "Hi," I said to the trainers,"thanks for saving me and my absol." I kneeled down, ignoring the pain. "I'm glad you're alright, Halo." I said to my absol as i stroked its silver fur. I looked up and asked the trainers, "What're your names? Mines Nick."

"It's a rare Pokemon. And I know that by the way that that man was fighting for it, that he loves that Pokemon. I just have a sinking feeling that it wasn't the last time that we see the hunter." I storke Absol again before it gets up and sniffs the air. The hospital door slides open and the man stepps out. Absol jumps to his side. I study his injuries. Burned, broken nose and arm from falling, and has several bruses.
I look at him for a moment longer before I say, "I'm sorry that my Charizard hurt you. If there's anything that I can do..."
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"I'm Andy, I'm glad we got you here in time. Would you like to rest at my place? It's not far from here, and it's probably much more comfortable than hsopital beds. I can get my Dewgong to carry you there, if you don't feel like walking."

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"Sure", I replyed to my new friend Andy,"I good enough to walk, though. Besides, it'll do my muscles some good." I stretched my muscles and looked into Halo's deep blue eyes.

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"My name's John. I'm a fire Pokemon master from Ever Grande City. I caught my Blaziken, Charizard, and my Typhlosion in the cave behind my house. I had evolved them. I had also defeated the Eleite Four in under one year. I'm glad to meet you. Andy, I'll be fine outside tonight, thanks. I'll camp out." I gather my Pokemon from the nurse and say goodnight.

"Nice to meet you both." I got my other pokemon from the nurse and walked outside with Andy and John.

((Where are we right now?))