Welcome to the site, I hope you enjoy it. Unfortunately, I can't give you the warm welcome you were probably hoping for [and the one I wish I could give] when you posted in this forum.

1] Double posting is against the rules. Granted, this rule is not followed to a 'T' in this forum we still discourage it, especially if it's not necessary.
2] You make your own characters. We can help with issues but we're not going to make them.
3] Your image coding is wrong.
4] You should have posted a chapter already. Please refer to the rules. You are supposed to have 3 chapters written prior to posting. This is to prevent people from dropping it and to encourage people to continue writing the story.