Just wondering what people would think/what I should improve on. The image isn't very well cropped as I tend to lean very lightly with pencils but try and ignore that .

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z207 ... salam2.jpg

*Edit:Uploaded darker version.

you need to darken the lines, its impossible to tell what it looks like from my computer

I've uploaded a darker version so hopefully it should be visible from your computer / [size=0]bump[/size]

It looks pretty good! Keep on drawing and try to get even better

yup definitly darken! but nice otherwize

id add color it look cool maybe some purple fire

Can't you make a SINGLE constructive post Juice Grant? It's rather annoying to see that one person has made the last post on every topic in the forum, and even more so when they're only fourwords long with no grammar.

I think that the drawing is awesome, by the way.

nice drawing, far batter than i could do... id use a darker pen for one, or just go over it in marker at the end

if you shade it a bit more, then it would be great!

I think you should enlarge the body if the head would be larger than the body but I have to admit it's nice.

omg gardy commenting on something.

The body looks very good and well-sculpted. The only problems are the tail looks a bit too long and stringy, and the legs (although it's probably because of the angle) look a bit stubby. The wings are iffy, the wing on Salamence's right looks to be slightly larger and a slightly different shape than its left.

The neck looks a bit bulgy, but is still good. The head seems to be a little too long, but is otherwise fine.

Also, I think if you are going to re-do this anytime soon, then you should either make the head and neck smaller or the body larger.

Overall, I'd give it an eight out of ten, because it's great, but there's a few minor flaws.