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Cal
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Apr 04, 2006 5:52 am Posts: 558 Location: The United Kingdom.
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Just wondering what people would think/what I should improve on. The image isn't very well cropped as I tend to lean very lightly with pencils but try and ignore that .
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z207 ... salam2.jpg
*Edit:Uploaded darker version.
Last edited by Cal on Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:20 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 10:35 am |
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Flaming_eclipse
Pokemon Trainer
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 3:07 pm Posts: 40
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you need to darken the lines, its impossible to tell what it looks like from my computer
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:52 pm |
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Cal
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Apr 04, 2006 5:52 am Posts: 558 Location: The United Kingdom.
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I've uploaded a darker version so hopefully it should be visible from your computer / [size=0]bump[/size]
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:22 am |
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pepsiluvr
Bug Catcher
Joined: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:50 am Posts: 15 Location: Massachusetts, USA
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It looks pretty good! Keep on drawing and try to get even better
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:59 am |
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embryonicdragonite
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Thu Jun 07, 2007 8:58 am Posts: 102 Location: In a restuarant at the other end of the universe
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yup definitly darken! but nice otherwize
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Sun Aug 05, 2007 6:10 am |
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Grunt Juice
Pokemon Trainer
Joined: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:46 pm Posts: 42
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id add color it look cool maybe some purple fire
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Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:40 pm |
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Swampert King
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:29 pm Posts: 626 Location: ^ Turkey. :D ^
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Can't you make a SINGLE constructive post Juice Grant? It's rather annoying to see that one person has made the last post on every topic in the forum, and even more so when they're only fourwords long with no grammar.
I think that the drawing is awesome, by the way.
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Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:45 pm |
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Jammy
Pokemon Trainer
Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:15 am Posts: 33
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nice drawing, far batter than i could do... id use a darker pen for one, or just go over it in marker at the end
if you shade it a bit more, then it would be great!
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:07 am |
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manuel_suplico2
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:07 pm Posts: 122 Location: just imagine it.
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I think you should enlarge the body if the head would be larger than the body but I have to admit it's nice.
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:46 pm |
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Rhapsody
Gym Leader
Joined: Wed Aug 31, 2005 4:37 pm Posts: 1906 Location: Some fabulous place
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omg gardy commenting on something.
The body looks very good and well-sculpted. The only problems are the tail looks a bit too long and stringy, and the legs (although it's probably because of the angle) look a bit stubby. The wings are iffy, the wing on Salamence's right looks to be slightly larger and a slightly different shape than its left.
The neck looks a bit bulgy, but is still good. The head seems to be a little too long, but is otherwise fine.
Also, I think if you are going to re-do this anytime soon, then you should either make the head and neck smaller or the body larger.
Overall, I'd give it an eight out of ten, because it's great, but there's a few minor flaws.
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