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I looked confused.

"So my dad is Ra, god of the sun?"

"Apparently so. I explains why your so hotheaded!" Horus grinned. I hadn't thought of ancient gods telling jokes, and he had just hit a sore spot.

"Doesn't bring back my Mom." I muttered.

"So, that's why you didn't try to burn me to ashes." Lee remarked.

"Pretty much." I replied.

"Meow!"

"What the he'll is my pet cat doing here?" I jumped.

The cat morphed into a semi-humanoid shape.

"Actually, that's Bast, cat goddess, who's been watching over you for practically your whole life, keeping those who wish to harm you from doing so."

Lee raised an eyebrow but said nothing.

"So, uh, what are you? No offense, but I don't think humans or even demigods have glowing shackles they always where?"

Horus answered for him. "Lee King is a forbidden. His mission has been to help us safeguard the demigods and keep them from being captured by,again, mysterious forces who wish to harm them"

I turned to Lee. "Could you explain what you are in English for a change?" I nodded toward Horus and Bast.

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Tue Apr 12, 2011 5:36 am
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((Ok Id like to wait until Edocsil getsa post in, cause we are getting close to where some stuff happens, and I dont want him to be in the dust."

The questuon caught me off guard, and i didnt really like Horus's explanation.

I turned back around, it seeemd Danei lwasnt gonna go to his room till he got an answer.

"Id rather explain that once Terry gets out of the Hopital."

I started again for my dorm but I stopped and turned around.

" Horus is only half righ. Im a forbidden among forbiddens, and I have a promise to potect everything."

Daneil was about to say something but stopped. He simply said he understood, and again followed Dehlila and Horus to his room.

I gave a sigh. And headed out the door to get to my Dorm and get some much needed rest.

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(as I've said about 10 times today, my computer for SOME REASON- not that I'm upset by it- can all of a sudden handle psypokes again. So what's going on?)

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Fri Apr 22, 2011 10:31 am
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((Ok, so Arceus101 AKA Daneil, has arrived at the university, met Lee AKA GofD, learned that RA is his fateher and is currently being shown to his room by Dehlila and Horus. Terry AKA Edocsil, is still in the Hospital and meeting his dad (I beleive thats where you stopped). GofD AKA Lee is on his way to his dorm room to get some sleep. Most of what has been done is character Introductions, nothing really big has happened. After Edocsils AKA Terry ahd his reunion wit hhis dad , THis RPG will et into some more depth.))

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(okay, then. since I'm not positive on how to make the reunion go as of now, I'll do this...)
I blinked, shaking my head. A wave of seemingly all emotions crashed over me. My father had just walked out of the room, after telling me all i need to know. A surge of strength coursed through me. I rose from my bed, but on some of my actual clothes, and walked out in to the hallway.

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((ok now lets get this thing REALLY GOING))

It was the next day, and I awoke from a pleasent sleep. I got word from Horus that Terry had met his father and is doing fine. I gave another strech and got up. It was 9 am. the girls would stil be in bed, since last night was a night class for them, like all others. I quickly got dressed and quietly went downstairs and out the door.

The day smelled fresh as I ate my breakfast at one of many outdoor cafe's on campus. The birds where chirping and crickets where... Criketing. But something just didnt feel right. I couldnt put my finger on it. I ate some more breakfast and decided I should go see Terry. I paid and left for the hospital.

Terry hadn't been "officaly" discharged yet, The docs wanted to observe him through the night. The walk to the hospital was pleasent, but somethign was still bugging me.

"Did I forget to close my fly again??"

I inconspicualy checked. It was fine and no embrasments would come from it. So then what was bothering me?? An envolope floated down from above. I caught it, thinking someone had lost it. But on it was the seal of the gods. I knew it was for me and opened it. Probably just a "how are they doing. Are the yall right, You havent killed them yet have you?" sort of thing. I opened it and read it.

Now I Know what was bugin me. The envolpe and message turned to dust and I started to boot it to the hospital . I asd to get Terry outta there and in with Horus. The message was from Anubis. And it wasnt good news. I wnet over it in my head....

"Bad News. Some of Atoms lower ranking officals have come out of slumber and are planning on awakening his army with the keys. Worse news one of them are located on campus in the museum. Worts news, We have no idea what it looks like."

FUDGE MONKEYS. Ive been fightin Atoms forces for a few months now. Mostly dried up reamins of military forces tha ttrun to dust in the slightest breeze. There has been a fwe generals that Ive had to contend with, but they where low ranking ones. Which meant they werent in ny better shape. But hey could still put up a fight. I had just finished recovering from the last scuffle.

I amnaged to get to the hosptial whiel it was still quiet. It usually picked up around 11:30. I asked the receptionist where I could find Terry She pointed down on of the halls. And i quickly, but not as too draw attetion to myself, went down the hall.

I found Terry eatin some food in one of the hospital cafe's for visitors. I walked up to him. HE didn't seem happy to see me, but at least he didnt look like he was gonna cause a commotion.

"Ive got to get to Horus's place, NOW."

I knew one thing, they're gona show up here sooner or later, buts its best if I get Terry to Horus's asap. Terry just shook his head and we were off to Horus's.

This means only one thing, the little scuffles Ive been having is gonna break out into full out WAR. And no mortal human would even know that their very existance is in danger.....

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Great.I almost didn't want to know what it was about. But i figured I'd save me, him, and my soul a lot of trouble by not asking what. at least it got me out of that stinking hospital.

A noise drew my attention. I stared around as we half ran, half walked, trying to place it. It was insistent and... for some reason gave me the chills. All I knew was that it was insistent, everywhere, and evil. I came so close to asking but then thought I valued my soul a bit more than this particular bit of information. I sighed and ran on, resorting to swatting the air around me as if it were merely a horsefly buzzing around that was annoying me.

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Terry ran behind me swatting the air. he tried to make it look like he was afetr a fly but I knew he felt it too. His father has to be ratehr pwoerful for him to be ablity ot have that ability.

"Listen, somthing big is going down. Im taking you to Horus's and Dehlila's place, until the situation is defused."

Terry simply nodded his head and continued runing.

When we got there Dehlila was in the door. I could tell right away she was worried. We both ran in and Dehlila closed the door. WE both stopped to trya nd catch our breath. Terry caught this fisrt Dehlila escorted him to an inner room. After a few more seconds I follwed them in. My lungs must still need a bit of time to heal.

The room was rather large and li by candle light. Dehlila offered Terry and Daneil, who was sitting on a victorian style couch looking confused, some wine. They both took it and drank it down rather fast. The walls were covered with a darck wallpaper patern.

"Where's Horus?"

Dehlila didnt even look up as she refilled Terry's and Daneil glass.

"He's coming."

Terry and Daneil both looked nervous, with Daneil showing it the most. I figured I better let them in on a bit of the info.

"I just got word that there is a chance that Aten's army is gonna get released. They need 7 keys to ddo it and one of them is here."

They stil looked confused, but they seemed to understand WHY they wher here. I was about to go on, when Horus comes rushing in. He handed mea set of keys and a drawing.

"These keys unlock the vault in the museum, And this is a supposed picture of wha tthe key looks like."

I nodded and hurried off. I dint know if they where gonna show today, but it's best to be safe.

I hurrried to the museum. The campus seemed quiet. Like it knew somethign bad was about top happen.I Pushed that from my mind and stepped up the pace.....

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