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Through the tinted window, he could barely make out a figure staring at his ship, well it wasn't exactly his, but you get my drift.

"I think I'm in even bigger trouble now.", he said. "Apperently, that's the owner of those droids, and I don't think she'll like that I destoryed most, if not all of them. I guess I should stand down, mabye she'll finish me off quickly.", he said the last part as he saw a lightsaber around her waist.

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Raziel ran into the shuttlebay and saw the bird woman, and then he looked at the ship, "i can take him down if you want" raziel said putting his lightsaber away and taking a laser rifle from his back, "i hope he knows this thing has EMP projectiles" he said putting the sight to his eye.


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Havec calmly raised one of her wings, and the craft's door opened again. "That will not be necessary, Raziel. Please step down from your ship immediately, sir, and present us with some identification" she said, still pretty cheery given the circumstances. "And please stop shooting my wall- we just finished repainting it."

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Raziel put the rifle back on his back and then saw that the intruder had climbed down from the ship and raziel then glanced at the lightsaber the intruder had on their belt, he then pointed his one of his wristguards at the person and pressed a button on it, a metal cable was then shot from it and it whizzed past the birdwoman and wound itself round the intruders arms and abdomen, binding the intruders arms to the sides of their abdomen, the intruder then fell over.


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((Almost all of that post was godmoding, kryten2x4b. You cannot control someone else's character, that includes making them move or saying that one of your character's attacks hits without giving the other player a chance to react.

Godmoding is one of the terms covered in my roleplaying basics guide. I've seen you having a bit of trouble with it in other places, you may want to look over said guide.))

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"Well, let's get this over with.", he sighed, expecting the worst. He left the cockpit of the ship, and soon the ship itself, carrying the lightsaber in his pocket, not that he was going to use it aganist her, what would be the point?

"My name....is Riven. I'll tell you my last name later, but not right now. It may sound weird for my age, but I'm currently a wanted man, for "murdering" the king of Malfax.", he said to the female humaniod bird, putting quote fingers on the word "murdering" And by the way, I only shot it once, and it was a complete accident, and....I'm sorry.

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((oops i did it again, my bad sorry, i've just got in from a party and i've completely check out, just ignore that post))


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"Well congratulations on excellent timing then, sir- if you'd found this place a hundred and fifty years ago you'd have been in real trouble. Let's get you inside then, and see if we can sort out this misunderstanding. Would one of my remaining droids be so kind as to check our guest for weapons?"

One such droids turned on a scanner at his wrist, using it from a safe distance. "M'am, you might be interested in the lightsaber in his pocket" said the droid, taking several large steps back. Havec narrowed her eyes, blinking curiously at the intruder.

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"Yeah, lucky me.", he said sarcastically.

"Well at least I don't think she wants to kill me...yet. You know, I think I might be taken this "OMFG! She's going to KILL ME!!" thing a bit too seriuosly."

"Hey, watch it!" he yelled at the droid searching him. He then looked at the bird woman for a moment and put an a face that looked like, "No I'm not going to go crazy and try to destory everything and everyone here."

"Um...is there a problem?...just to let you know...I just found this lightsaber on the ship not too long ago...", he said nerviously.

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"problem miss" raziel said as he walked upto the birdlike womans side, he then eyed the intruder suspiciously, "if you want me to icould take care of this gentlemen...free of charge" raziel said as as he continued to eye the intruder.


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"You'd better hand it to my droid, sir- he'll see to it that it's put in good hands until we get this whole matter sorted out" she said, adding a fair amount of force persuasion to her request. She put a hand between the bounty hunter and the prince, indicating that the hunter should stand down. "I'm sorry for this search, but you are a stranger to us, and we have unarmed youngsters inside. We need to take precautions to keep ourselves safe."

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"Alright...as long as Mr. Crazy Psychopatic Hunter doesn't shoot me; and don't worry about it, just answer two questions. One, where am I? Two, who are you?"

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"Both, sir, are pieces of information being sought by many. You are in a place that is warm and safe, where you will be provided with a bed and a warm meal while you hide from whoever's after you. I am a friend, or at least not an enemy, and I am also an outlaw thanks to a lie told by the rich few to the masses" she replied kindly, being very diplomatic about her answer-that-was-not-an-answer.

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"excuse me, but i just wanted to know if you needed any bodyguards for the council, hell i'd even take a security job..... free of charge of course" raziel said to the birdlike woman, "i like the feel of this place, plus the whole bountyhunter thing has been quiet lately" he added.


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"I may well have an excellent position for you, Raziel, but such delicate matters should not be discussed in front of our guest" she said, putting one finger to her lips in an indication that silence was needed on the matter. "The winds of change blow strongly today, and they have much to teach."

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"Yay, more secrets!", he said sarcastically "So far, I all know is that this place is just a creepier version of a bed & breakfast, but at least my head is still on my shoulders, and can safely assume it'll stay like that."

"Well, since we are all acquanited, could you hand m my lightsaber back? I promise that I won't destory any of your droids, or anything like that. But if you think it's for the best, then I understand.", he said, trying to sound as sincere as possible, just in politeness.

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"thankyou for considering it, now about this robotic arm" raziel said to the bird like woman, "oh and could you reassure your guest that i won't harm him".


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The falcon Sith lord laughed, "I suppose I am being a bit secretive. Call me Havec, and I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. This is Raziel, and he isn't here to harm you, he's been helping us with a security problem, and I'm sure you can understand why he might be edgy." As she spoke, she calmly took the lightsaber from the droid and put it in one of her pockets. You do not want the lightsaber back she thought at the prince, applying her specialty of mind manipulation to the unspoken command.

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"Hmm...did you hear something?", he asked Havec.

"Oh nevermind, it was nothing, just my imagination. Anyway, nice to meet you, I guess.", he said.

"What was that? I know I heard something, but what?"

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"Let's get you inside, then- we were just having lunch, and I'm sure we can find something for you to eat as well. The droids should set us on full stealth mode automatically, so I'm sure you'll be safe here for a fair while" she said, opening the door for her guest.

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"could you excuse me while i go back to my ship and change into something more comfortable, the armours getting a bit heavy" raziel said as he walked off toward his ship.

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Raziel entered his ship and changed back into his old jedi outfit, ((the same as anakins from episode III)) he then put his old lightsaber on his belt, he then noticed something flashing on a computer console in the cockpit, he then noticed it as a tracking device, "nice try jedi" raziel said as he used a small spark of electricity from his robotic arm to deactivate it
"hey this arm has some good points" he said examining his new arm and hand, he then exited his craft and entered the temple.

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Raziel found the birdlike woman and showed her the tracking device, "it was on a console in my ship, i have deactivated it but you might want to up your security a bit" he said to her as he put the device in his pocket.


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"Um, thank you. Personally I wasn't expected to be treated with such...kindness, especially after I kinda....lowered your droid amount...and damaged your wall, even though that was still an accident.", he said, still a bit unnerved.

"But anyway, I'm hungry, haven't had a decent meal in a while, being on the run and all.", he spoke again, trying to sound dramatic with the "being on the run" phrase.

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"The makeup of this asteroid prevents transmission from almost all tracking devices" replied Havec calmly, holding the door for the bounty hunter. "It also prevents communications in other forms from the inside to the outside, just one of the reasons why it was chosen for its original purpose. And don't worry, mister on-the-run, we'll find something of value in your little ship to replace the droids- they're really quite cheap if you buy in bulk from the right sort of supplier."

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"But if you use my ship...then how am I eventually going to get out; I'm not going to stay here forever, obviously.", he said, concerned.

((Geh, sorry for the short post, but I gotta go now, bye-bye! Again, don't post too much!))

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