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 Peril of the Ancients - Open 

What do you think of Pokémon Role Plays?
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 Peril of the Ancients - Open 
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Crevice stared strangely at Todo, wondering why smashing into a gazillion pieces sounded like fun. Deciding that the suicune had the safest and less painful idea, Crevice followed her lead.

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"What about here? Exploring this place might be fun. Besides, the worst that can happen is that we knock out a few more of those people (Yes, now he knows) when we escape", Omanyte said. He waited for awhile, then followed Aria's lead anyway.

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Has my fanfic died already? :cry:

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((I can't think of anything to say, but I'll try anyway.))

Crevice stopped suddenly and growled at a door, he didn't like the smell that was coming from it, it reminded him too much of something...he wasn't quite sure what.

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Omanyte stopped as soon as the Vaporeon stopped; he had no idea what the Vaporeon was sniffing, as he had no nose. Then he remembered a trick that he had used underwater.

He got into position, then rapidly blasted water at the door. Soon the little pipe was filling up, and they were submerged.

The odour wafting from the door was compacted into bubbles; Omanyte now knew how they smelled as they popped. It smelled like another Pokémon; combustion; fusion; sparks; spikes.

Before he knew it, the door collapsed, and the water was rapidly rushing out!

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Crevice yelped loudly as he was carried along by the rushing water, trying to get back into gear for swimming, he kicked his three working legs and used his tail. Thankfully, he quickly managed to keep himself from sinking. Crevice then looked around himself, still swimming, trying to spot any of the others.

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Very happy that at least he could spot at least one of his acquaintances, he hung from his suction tentacles to take a look.

He saw what he had been smelling: a staticky, burn-smelling Jolteon! It was peering around intently, having missed him and the Vaporeon in his scanning gaze.

Suddenly, from the order of one of the humans beside it, it Thunder-bolted the pipe-wall, making it a fitting niche. It pounced inside and let the static accumulate.

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Crevice felt the hair on his back prickle at the smell of electricity. If there was one thing he hated almost as much as Mantines it was electrical pokemon. Diving under the water so not to be seen, he slowly swam loser to the Jolteon. Trying not to get seen or heard, he waited for the opportune moment to do whatever would be best to do.

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Are PKMNAddictSora and I the only members now?
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Omanyte felt moderate pulses through body, as current surged weakly everywhere from the Jolteon. A plan burst into life as he saw the humans begin to walk away.

He withdrew into his shell, and rapidly water-wheeled off the edge and THONK! went the collision. The Jolteon heard this audibly and became distracted dashing to the scientist's aid.

Before he crash to the floor, Omanyte shouted to the Vaporeon, "NOW!"

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Yeah, I've been wondering that myself.
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Acting solely on instinct, Crevice leaped out of the water and sunk his teeth into the Jolteon's back, growling loudly. Quickly, he closed his eyes to protect them from the flying sparks hitting his body. Crevice couldn't ever recall attacking another pokemon before, but it seemed the best option now. Tensely, he waited for the Jolteon to make a move.

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Sigh... I'll try including someone else and see what happens...

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Omanyte tumbled on the floor, once again paralyzing himself. He began having visions, visions of a dark awakening, a new revolution and the like. All vision almost darkened, he waited for the Eeveelutions' clash and how his other friends would help.

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Subtle hint in the last sentence.

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*author side note: Hmm... my fanfic about a Pokémon got destroyed because of Mary-sue-ness and lack of plot... let's see my try of hand here!
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PLOT: Ancient Pokémon fight for survival in a world they once existed in eons ago. Nothing is the same... nor will it ever be again.
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Info needed is:

Age:
Gender: (Alt+11 for Male, Alt+12 for Female, "#" for Genderless)
Species: Sea Pokémon/Inanimate Object:P
Alliance: Good/Bad
Personality:
Good Habits:
Bad Habits:
Born at:
Dreams:
Burdens:
Any Companions:
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Omanyte ? - Good
About 125,000,000 years old... considered quite young by other Ancients
Quite hasty, but courageous
Thinks tactically
Reckless and a bit fidgety
Revived at Devon Co. and released near Sealed Chamber
Has a great wish to be able to swim faster
Heavy shell; his bad reputation as an "old thing"
Remembers having made friends with neighbouring Anorith 125,000,000 yrs. ago

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Rules:
-No godmoding, powerplaying, overcontrol, mary-suing
-You must a be a species of Pokémon that lives under the sea, or be an inanimate object waiting to be toyed with :lol: :P
-If you're good, know that faults and succumbing to different factors is encouraged, as long it will flow with the story
-If you're bad, know that you WILL be eventually defeated, but that you will always rise again (possibly to die again :P)
-You cannot make another character die. That person must be sensible enough to die when it's time, at which point they will be given the choice to be a fossil or an inanimate object
-Don't suddenly sharply bend the plot... make it fluid.
-You cannot choose a Pokémon species already chosen without good reason, or if you're a different gender. Even so, try to be a different species of Pokémon (you can still be pre-evolutions or evolutions) from everbody else
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Character List
Omanyte ? - 1.25*10^8 yrs. - elite42 (ME!)
Horsea ? named Spike - 7 yrs. - RECOLORER
Vaporeon ? named Crevice - 24 yrs. - PKMNAddictSora
Ditto ? codenamed Aria - ??? - Kawaii Angel
Totodile ? named Todo - 8 yrs. - Paco

Characters still can join, but there will be a lesser chance as the storyline has begun.

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The story has begun. Characters joining now will be pended.
{piplup} named aquo male-Good
age-10
personality- loves fighting
good habits- good attack and defense
bad habits- lazy and doesn't listen that much
born at northern sea
dream of being the strongest water type
burdens-hated by almost all water types
a mantine who follows him around and makes up for his weaknesses
Edit: I'll just be evil

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Accepted!

icelblazer, please include your starting paragraph on your scenario where you'll start off. Eventually (but smoothly) connect to the current story.

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then suddenly the trainer sent out a piplup and said "now don't let them escape" so pilup did as he was told and froze all exites. Thinking who and why the pokemon were battling but followed orders.
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sorry I couldn't think of anything

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Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:33 pm
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Ummm.... well, it's part of the story, so fix your grammar. And do try to make it smoother... did you read the previous parts? It's important.

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