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Vaporeon was just sleeping in his cosy coral bed until he heard a loud clap outside. As he carefully swam outside he saw a very dangerous blizzard in the sky with thunder and lightning.
"What?" Vaporeon wondered.
"I must warn the pokemon in my territory!"
So Vaporeon loudly screamed in his bubblespeaker,
"Everyone evacuate immediately now. The water is freezing fast. Go down the river to the ocean!"
So every pokemon in Vaporeon's territory swam quick down the river and to the ocean.
But then he was too late. The current in the river was so fast that it left without him and the water had already frozed.
"Oh,no!" he cried.
"Can anyone help me, please?"
He then heard voices that sounded familiar.
"Jolteon?, Espeon? are you there?"
"Hello, Jolteon, I can hear you, please help me get out of here, please!"


I hope this is okay for the start of {vaporeon}

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~p o k e~ spriter wrote:
Espeon starts to walk around looking for berries to save up in his cave. Overhead he hears the cries of pokemon and he see's a huge gust come raging toward him. He quickly dodges and starts to run toward the way the raging gust came from.


Ok edited is that ok??

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Vaporeon feels the vibration of somebody running across the sheet of ice. He cries out even louder "Hello, please help me!" but the words faded away due to the wind.

I wrote this because I believe that {vaporeon} is stuck underwater and {espeon} hears his cries. So {espeon} comes and tries to find {vaporeon}. If this is wrong please tell me to edit it. Here is a diagram of what I thought. Image

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I here you vaporeon! Wow there must be like almost 3 feet of ice covering it! *Espeon steps out of the ice and uses psychic to lift up the ice to help vaporeon* Ok vaporeon! I got the ice out, hurry up before you freeze!

Was that good or?? Want me to edit it?

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Why ara you asking me if its good? The only way it wouldn't would be if it breaks my rules or it doesnt make sense!

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"Thanks Espeon!"
"YOU SAVED MY LIFE!"
"We better go somewhere safe where we can rest".
Vaporeon had a frozen tail so it would take a longer period of time to find a safe place.
"Espeon do you have a berry that can unfreeze me?"

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Jolteon looked into the thin air with a weird feeling. "I can feel it... I think I can sense espeon and vaporeon! It must be some brother connection. Come on, guys! What if they're hurt! Umbreon, you bring aspear berries. Leafeon, you defende umbi. Glaceon, make sure they don't kill thereselfs. No questions. Bye!" said jolteon, and then took off running towards espeon's territory.

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"Jolteon! Get back so I can rip you to shreds!" shouted Umbreon angerly. "Why does he think I need protection? If he doesn't quit he'll end up like those Murkrow bones in my den!"

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Ok lets go back to my cave I foreged soem berries before I came out here and saved you. I think I got a berry that can unfreeze you. I have a blue one that kinda looks like your tail.

Espeon and Vaporeon start to walk toward espeons cave which is to the north.

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In the dim blizzard, while going to Espeon's territory, Vaporeon saw a familiar face running towards him and Espeon. As it ran closer flashes of yellow and white came running to him.
"Jolteon, is that you?"

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"Of course I will protect you bro! No need to be afraid! I'm with you! " said Leafeon laughing and followed Jolteon. He hoped Umbreon is not planning to attack him for making fun of him.


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Yes! I knew you were here! For some...strange reason I felt that you were near! But what the heck are you doing here?" Said jolteon. Then he looked around and saw a cave with a purple light coming from it and a hole in the ice. "Ah, I see vaporeon was in that ice. And it seems like you're going into espeon's cave. It's freezing out here. Can I come, two? Leafeon and Umbreon will be here soon. The slowpokes didn't even attempt to follow me!"

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Ok everyone come. Man I might run out of space soon.. After we rest we need to go and look for the others. Said Espeon. I gathered more than 50 berries so we have more than enough to eat. Also I saw some trainers having a snack and they left for a little bit so I snatched there sandwhiches. One was a girl one a boy. They seemed to have a pokemon that looked like a bird with flames coming out of its wing. It looked like it was trapped inside a cage. Another looked like an icy bird. It was also trapped inside a cage. They were hooked up to something. Maybe they are the cause of all this havoc. Does anyone know what they are?

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I may know what they are but we don't need to discuss it now! I'm too cold and I am quite tired. Let's all take a rest at Espeon's cave and then we can find Umbreon and Leafeon later. By the way, Jolteon, do we have to find Glaceon too?

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Flareon was running like he never ran before.There was a flash fire in his territory,and he needed to rescue the Bulbasaur who had strayed in.So he was going to Leafion's territory.But when he got there the place was wrecked."It looks like a tornado hit this place" Flareon said in awe."A tornado DID hit thisd place."some Treecko's said."Almost everyone fled,your brother Leafion to.He went to your brother,Umbreon's territory."
That struck Flareon as odd."Would you please escort this Bulbasaur to the place where he can live with his kind?"
"Sure can."the Treeckos said.And then they left.
Now Flareon knew he had to go to Espeon's cave.That way he could know if Umbi had ripped Leafion to shreds.But when he got there he saw Espeon and Vapreon and Jolteon there.His stomach growled,and all three turned and looked at him.
"Hi guys,could i...er...uh...have some food?"Flareon stammered nervously."AND WHERE ARE THE OTHER THREE?"he suddenly asked.


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"Don't worry, flareon. And Glaceon is with umbreon and leafeon. I was travaling with them for a while, but the two slowpokes got caught in my dust. They should be here soon." said jolteon. "But why did you come all the way to espeon's territory, Flareon?"

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Jolteon is flareon with us? Eh. Anyways

Ok Vaporeon after we rest up we will go look for glaceon and the others.
Espeon, Jolteon and Vaporeon go into espeons cave. They rest, Eat and get there infrozen. They then head out to look for the others.

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~p o k e~ spriter wrote:
Jolteon is flareon with us?

You should have seen this post:
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Flareon was running like he never ran before.There was a flash fire in his territory,and he needed to rescue the Bulbasaur who had strayed in.So he was going to Leafion's territory.But when he got there the place was wrecked."It looks like a tornado hit this place" Flareon said in awe."A tornado DID hit thisd place."some Treecko's said."Almost everyone fled,your brother Leafion to.He went to your brother,Umbreon's territory."
That struck Flareon as odd."Would you please escort this Bulbasaur to the place where he can live with his kind?"
"Sure can."the Treeckos said.And then they left.
Now Flareon knew he had to go to Espeon's cave.That way he could know if Umbi had ripped Leafion to shreds.But when he got there he saw Espeon and Vapreon and Jolteon there.His stomach growled,and all three turned and looked at him.
"Hi guys,could i...er...uh...have some food?"Flareon stammered nervously."AND WHERE ARE THE OTHER THREE?"he suddenly asked.
"Stop joking aroung leafeon! This is serious! Anyway, we better fing out where Jolteon went before its to late!" As they continiued towards the direction Jolteon went until a huge clump of ice fell right next to Umbreon. "What the heck is that?" But his question was soon anwsered, it turned around and he saw the face of a, Glalie.

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I have a weird feeling. My tail is vibrating very loudly. I can't control it!! Help, grab my tail and stop the vibrating. But then Vaporeon remembered that if his tail vibrated there was going to be a rainstorm. Unfortunately, the vibration was so rapid, it meant that there was going to be a flood!

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"Why does it matter that your wagging your tail?" laughed Jolteon, but then he got up in alarm. "I can sense it... Umbreon and the others are in trouble! Didn't I tell Glaceon to make sure they didn't kill therselves? Bye!" said Jolteon, running back the way he came.
He quickly saw Umbreon, Leafeon and Glaceon being attacked by a Glalie. Before it could notice him, he began charging electricity inside of him. The charging attrated the Glalie's attention and it look at Jolteon. "Eat this, sucker! THUNDER BOLT!" shouted Jolteon, releasing a powerful stream of electricity. Unlucky for the Glalie, it went into it's mouth and exploded. The blow left the Glalie injured and dizzy, unable to battle for a while. "Umbreon! What did you do?" snapped Jolteon at Umbreon.

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Jolteon wait! Oh no, he thinks I'm lieing. I'm not lieing, there is going to be the biggest flood in history, I know there is. I can heavily sense it. Now I need to get to Jolteon and tell him! Oh this is so chaotic.

It's true if you look in the pokedex entries of Vaporeon it will say something about if Vaporeon's tail is vibrating there is going to be a rainstorm.

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Umbreon didn't bother to anwser Jolteon. "BITE!" Umbreon jumped ontop of the Glalie and veoshisly chomped over and over again. "Hmph, just like hunting Murkrow!"

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Oh this is crazy! What is happening? I'm confused! Then Vaporeon spins around and falls to the ground so tired and sleepy from all the warning and shouting. Then Vaporeon says to everyone while yawning, everyone just take a rest first then we can.......... Vaporeon then just snored and slept.

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Yeah, yeah yeah." said Jolteon."Thunder wave!" Jolteon released a stunning ball of electricity at the Glalie. While it was stunned, Jolteon sent his sharp fur [pin missle] at the glalie. it flew at it and sent pain rithering through it.

Really, it says in the pokedex that Jolteon's fur is sharper than a knife. And yes, they learn pin missle.

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Espeon then uses its psychic powers and lifts the glalie into the air so the others can attack it. "Go guys make this glalie faint so we can all rest!"

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