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 Hell Hath No Fury (Not for young children) 
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Pokemon Master
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[color=#A37AEE]Hello, I got bored and decided to write a story loosely based up the Legacy of Kain series. As I said I was bored so don't expect an amazing piece of writing, I will update nearly every day so be prepared. This isn't very suitable for young children due to some imagery.

Hell Hath No Fury


Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:46 pm
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You havea pretty cool writing style, but this is a short chapter. I'd like to see longer updates out of you, even if it means lower update frequency.


Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:03 pm
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[color=#A37AEE]As I said, I was bored so I didn't plan on making it too long, this chapter is longer though.

Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 2: Sarafan Stronghold

I stood silently in the cathedral, looking around at the bodies of the slaughtered men, their blood drained. I wiped the last remains of the blood from my mouth and knelt down on the ground.

>>Foolish humans...<< I thought to myself

I stood up before leaping up to the rafters and out of the hole in the ceiling.

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I leapt down from the wall and into the Sarafan Cemetery. I walked through the silent cemetery, watching out for any movement


Thu Jun 15, 2006 8:32 am
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Heh, another great story by Tooexforbee. Can't wait for more! 9/10. One of your best, as Banov said, you have a talent and a unique writing style. Keep this one going.
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Thu Jun 15, 2006 9:01 am
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Nice story! 9.5/10


Thu Jul 20, 2006 4:21 pm
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