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Wow another one

she knew she shouldn't but she couldn't help it. There she was all alone. No one in sight but she couldn't help worrying if someone saw her. For every step she took she worried even more. She started to sweat as she crept closer. "Okay one more step" she kept telling herself. She knew she would never get away with it. It was the thrill of the chase. It lured her. It called her. She stopped, she could hear someone passing. Her little heart beating faster she couldn't help but think they were going to see her, she stopped breathing as he passed without a glance.
She again was all alone, she thought "something must be done."
But she was still young and she still has a concience. But the youth in her told her to go for it. But as she lifted her hand she heard a voice behind her say, "hello can i help you?"

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Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:58 am
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If i say yes will you promise not to beat me again. Lol just kidding no i guess this was a fluke I tend to have those from time to time lol just kidding i'm perfect. 8-)

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This story wasn't even a story, it was..not good. And your post didn't make sense either. There should be a rule that you can't have too many short one-shots at a time. And you're obviously not perfect.

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Poplers, sweetie, he was refering to a different one-shot conversation. We're all aware that he's very new to writing, which is nothing to be ashamed of. He's aware that he's not perfect, and was just making another joke.

As for the rule on one-shots, well that'd break my heart. I happen to adore one-shots, no matter how short or long. I adore writing them just as much as reading them.

No need to get fiesty, I'll be out of a job then. :roll: All cheesy humor aside, he's aware of all that and will, hopefully, continue to practice and improve.

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...fluke I tend to have those from time to time lol just kidding i'm perfect.

I was referring to that part of his post, I've seen all the other conversations.

Well, I know the rule is a bit radical, (And I don't want it put in place by any means) but as of now, he has 6 one-shots, that pretty much all consist of one to two paragraphs. Thats what I was getting at.

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I knew which part of the post you were refering to, and I assure you he was joking. I only counted 4 one-shots, one of which was a poem. Which ones were you counting?

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I don't want to sound conceited but i didn't know people were paying that much attention to me :oops: I'm so embberrest

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Well, I wish to say all the attention was good, but I can't.


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I agree Treecko, but our dear Sparky has learned his lesson so we can only wait for the improvements for now.

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