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 Cubonix and Steelwak AND MUCH MORE! :) 
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Hi! I'm new here and I would like to show you some of my work.

I made two fusions, and as you can see, I mixed Cubone + Onix and Marowak + Steelix.

Cubonix:
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Steelwak:
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I'm not very good at this, and I'd like to get some constructive critique. :)

EDIT:
I tried to make the bones look better. Here is the result:
Cubonix:
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Steelwak:
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Here is a new fusion,
Jimecho:
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2nd EDIT:
More stuff:
Nidocruel:
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Nidocool:
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iPod Pokemon:
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From Green to Diamond/Pearl colours:
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Yellow to D/P:
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Red/Blue to D/P:
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:26 am
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Correction: you ARE good at this. The heads look brilliant, exactly how Ninty would do 'em (although more... bizarre). Scratch-sprited, no? I'd say the things you need to improve on are the bones - on Cubonix' tail, it looks rather odd and out-of-place. Maybe avoiding it altogether would've been good. Steelwak's bone is badly coloured, and it doesn't match with the rest of the body. Also, there's no line where it connects with the body, but it doesn't have the same shade as the body either. You should fix that.

If those are your early sprites, then I'd say you've got a lot of potential.

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I agree that the bones look odd, and I'm going to do something to them. Maybe quite soon.
Thanks for the critique! :)


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Yeah those are good.

Are they your first try?
You have potential.


Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:05 am
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tigerd wrote:
Yeah those are good.

Are they your first try?
You have potential.


Thanks! :)

No, they're not my first, but I've done just something like 10 fusions/other things before. And most of them were crappy. :D


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Really good.

I don't believe your others were crappy :D !


Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:40 pm
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Better! The shading on the bones are good, blends well with the bodies of the sprites. Jimecho is also great... can't really see anything wrong with it.

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Yeah, i like Jimecho, too!

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Thanks to you all!

Now here's more of my stuff:

From Green to Diamond/Pearl colours:
Rapidash:
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Psyduck:
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Red/Blue to D/P:
Hitmonlee:
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Lapras:
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Gyarados:
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Yellow to D/P:
Scyther:
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Articuno:
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Venusaur:
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Wartortle:
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Ivysaur:
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Ninetales:
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Enjoy! :)

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once you get 50 post go to the shop approval then make sure they say yes!
10/10

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pokemonever515 wrote:
once you get 50 post go to the shop approval then make sure they say yes!
10/10


Oh thanks! :)
I didn't know I'm that good. :D

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your shading is awsome and fusions are awsome

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Hmmm, problem with the revamps; dots. Dots are the ugly pixels outside the outline. Darken them, it'll look much better. And on Cubonix, the bone looks out of place and.... it doesn't really blend in; on the Steelwak it looks cool like that; you might want to try recoloring the bone on Cubonix.

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It's so nice to get constructive critizism! :)

The fixed ones:
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Here are some new ones:
Mewtwo centaur:
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This happens when you trade Pokemon when you don't have all the 8 badges:
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The animations are supposed to be crappy, because I just wanted to have a little fun. :D

And here is my first trainer card:
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Hopefully you like them. :)

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The nidocool and cubonix (in my opinion) would look better without the horns. However the another one (especially mewtwo centaur) rocks, i rate them 10/10!!

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I like the TC, and the Fusions are good. I really really like them. 9/10

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Mewtwelve wrote:
It's so nice to get constructive critizism! :)

The fixed ones:
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Image

Image

Image

Image

Here are some new ones:
Mewtwo centaur:
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This happens when you trade Pokemon when you don't have all the 8 badges:
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Image

The animations are supposed to be crappy, because I just wanted to have a little fun. :D

And here is my first trainer card:
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Hopefully you like them. :)



Yeah, yeah, that's what I'm talking about! Cubonix's bone looks much better, and the dots are removed! 10/10!

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Oh yeah! I made a lot of weird stuff! :D

Fusions:

Scythken:
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Tropiuslee:
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Mothly:
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Bulbadum: Image Metasaur: Image Venugross: Image

Pinkorita: Image Beautileef: Image Megacoon: Image

Less-fat Wartortle:
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Other stuff:
Regiflame:
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Very angry Regirock (my personal fav):
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Whew! That needed a lot of copypaste. :D
I hope that you enjoy and comment! :)

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