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 THE ADVENTUREs OF MUDKIP!!! Read it NOW!!!!! 

What's your favourite starter?
Mudkip 25%  25%  [ 28 ]
Torchic 9%  9%  [ 10 ]
Treecko 8%  8%  [ 9 ]
Totodile 6%  6%  [ 7 ]
Cyndaquil 18%  18%  [ 21 ]
Chikorita 6%  6%  [ 7 ]
Squirtle 8%  8%  [ 9 ]
Charmander 20%  20%  [ 23 ]
Total votes : 114

 THE ADVENTUREs OF MUDKIP!!! Read it NOW!!!!! 
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You are Mudkip. You wander around Littleroot Town. Then you decide to enter Prof. Birch's Lab. You walk up to him and talk. Prof says,"Hello. How it is it like in the wild?". You talk to him again. He replies,"Can you please get out? You're starting to annoy me." You tackle him. He pushes you out of the lab. You re-enter. He pushes you out again. You repeat this process for a while. Then you get bored and walk into Brendan's house and watch TV. "Rogue Mudkip Discovered by PROF. BIRCH! LOOK FOR A MUDKIP WITH AN EVIL GRIN!!!" Then suddenly you start grinning evily. Brendan's mom notices and starts to catch you. You two run around the table for a while. Then you run upstairs. Brendan sees you and asks if you can be his "temporary" Pok

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That is hillarious! 8/10

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!!!!!!!!THIS IS PART 2!!!!!!!!

You are back in Rustboro. You run to the route northeast of Rustboro (route 10_ ) and Youngster sees you. He summons a Nincada. You are scared and run away from the Nincada. You look behind and do not see it. Suddenly, you feel a strong impact under your tummy, and you're suddenly flying at 30 mph.
While you're "enjoying" the experience, you see that Nincada was the one that bumped you. You twist your body and try landing on a safe-looking spot. Then- WHAM!!!! You're gliding in the air again. This gets repeated a few times until you Water Gun the Nincada and it dies in 1 shot. You run to Rustsurf Tunnel where Mr. Briney is waitng outside. You enter. There, you find a Team Aqua Grunt with Peeko. He is holding the Devon Goods. You run towards him and surprise him. He sends out Zubat. You tackle the Zubat and it crashes into the ceiling and faints. The Grunt is very surprised and tries to escape. Luckily, he accidentally dropped the Devon Goods. You start dragging, and Peeko follows you. The Goods scratch the ground very loudly, and the Grunt notices and snarles,"You little!!!" He throws a Pok

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That excellent!keep it up!

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!!!!!!!!!!!!PART 3!!!!!!!!!!!

Anyways, back to you. You decide to head back to brendan's house. When you enter, Brendan's mom tries to catch you. Again. You dodge her attempts and enter Brendan's room, where Brendan is playing Battleship: The Final War on his PC. Brendan's mom comes upstairs, screaming,"That mudkip is ROGUE!!!!!!" Brendan quickly explains but she doesn't take it. That was it. It was time, the time, for what every creature does when they're rejected. You gave her the puppy eyes.

For a few seconds, she stared at you saying,"awww...." Then she stumbled downstairs. Now you were sure your semi-trainer's mom was on your side. You decide to take a stroll outside. You enter Prof. Birch's lab. As usual, he pushes you out. But before your out the door, you shoot an amazing 25cm wide stream of mud at the prof. He's forced to the back of the lab. You quickly evacuate.

Suddenly, an earthquake starts, an clears a pathway. You're scared and try entering Brendan's house, but it's locked. Same with May's. CRASH!!!! Prof. Birch's door breaks down. You decide to run when you notice something that looks like an acorn. You water it, and it grows into a small Seedot tree. 5 Seedots jump off. You quickly water the soil, so the soil is soft and mushy. They all have a safe landing. Just then, everyone in all of Hoenn (excluding Nurse Joy, Pok

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WWWWAAAAAYYYY tooo FFFUUUUNNNNYYYY!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D 9/10


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;) Cute. 6.5/10.

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Oh! It's cool and I like it. Continue Part 4 quickly! 9/10

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Its nice.Almost made me feel like a Mudkip.
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i i i i i PARt 4 ! ! ! ! !

You suddenly get a jolt of speed as you end up in Verdanturf Town. You zip into Rustsurf Tunnel, with the seedots following close behind, and the crowd in hot pursuit. You run out the western exit of the tunnel where this nerdy-looking(:roll:) guy is standing there looking for his glasses. You tackle him and then split the group. You and 2 seedots go to a place called Quincy's Base near the northeast, and the other 3 seedots go into the northern base called Mike's Base.

Inside Quincy's Base, you jump on to a tire with a mudkip and a torchic doll on it. The seedots sit on the pedestal and pretend to be dolls. But you all forgot something. You still forgot to pretend to stop breathing.

The mob easily sow you as fakes for dolls, and just as you and the other seedots were thought to be done for, a 10-year old called quincy stepped in, shouting," Hey, bubs!!! No-one without special permission can enter my base now get out!!!!" He repeated this a couple of times. They wouldn't stop surging the short distance to you and the seedots. Finally, Quincy took action. He sent out 3 his of collosuses, Groudon, Aggron and Metagross. They all made quick work of 1/2 if the mob and the other 1/2 timidly fled. You and the seedots were saved!...

You thanked Quincy and ran to Mike's Base. Inside the other 1/2 of the mob was there. Mike was frantically trying to beat back the crowd with Pok

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soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny!!!! can't wait for next chapter

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i i i i i5 traP-Part 5! ! ! ! !

You return to Brendan's house and eat some Pok

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It is really funny.Being a pokemon might be fun after all...
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i i i i iPart 6! ! ! ! !

You decide to run back to Brendan's house. When you get there, you decide to take a nice nap.

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*finish later*
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i'm back:

After your 3 hour nap, you decide to walk outside. All of a sudden, you have this... urge. You run as fast your legs can carry you past Oldale, through the first few routes, past Petalburg, out of the forest, through Rustboro, out of Rustsurf Tunnel, into Route 118, surfing and mud shot-ing Gabby and TY on the way, all the way to Fortree City!

Panting, you go in the red building marked "PC", and heal up. Then you decide to wander to the right of Fortree. Suddenly a blue box lands from out of nowhere in front of you. You decide to open it, and find a small pack, and a Mudkip design cellphone!!!

Wow, you think as you put the pack on and hold the cellphone. Just then Brendan calls you by your phone.

Brendan: Hey! Like the Mudkip design cellphone? I got it for you! Hope you like it! Anyways, I lost my Devon Scope near Fortree. Can you help me get it back since you're there? Thanks! Click

You put away the cellphone and wander into the grass. Suddenly, something shiny catches your eye: it's the Devon Scope! Tired, you walk towards it. Suddenly, something black and white flits across the corner of your eye. And again. And again and again and again.

What can it be?????
TO BE CONTINUED
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Bonus Contest!!!!!
If you've read this chapter, in your reply, have a 70x70 picture (maybe from the avatars) depicting what you think it is! There will be a SMALL reward.

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nice i write a story on a dutch internet page http://www.forum.animewolken.nl
:!: its dutch

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dragon-master-b wrote:
nice a write a story on a dutch internet page http://www.forum.animewolken.nl
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how? i can barely read anything!

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elite42 wrote:
dragon-master-b wrote:
nice a write a story on a dutch internet page http://www.forum.animewolken.nl
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how? i can barely read anything!

what can't you read i'm dutch and my engish isn't very good :oops:

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i'm NOT dutch, my english is excellent and my dutch is barely worth listening to.

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i'm dutch THE NETHERLANDS 4 EVER

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PART 7


it's an absol!!! you rapidly try to spot it left and right, but it flits too fast and knows to use the shadows too well. Then it jumps towards you with big long 6-inch sharp things (you don't know what they are) coming out of it's paws, crimson red eyes, and an eerie purple halo around it. Then, quick as a flash, a searing pain, a flash of crimson, maroon and black, a sensation of falling, and suddenly you're in the Pok

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part 8 coming up:

You're sailing on the ocean with the master balls in pursuit. Suddenly, a huge magnet rises out of the water, attracting Briney's boat as well as the balls. Just as you were going to get caught, yu execute a steeled dive into the water, and paddle around. Then you see the magnet, with the boat and the 3 master balls attached submerge back to the bottom.

Yoou've been diving for a while, and it seems that the magnet attached to the steel pole is leaning towards you. As if it was responding, the force of the master balls pulled the magnet out of the steel pole from the ground and chased you underwater.

You're paddling on the surface with the master balls attached to the magnet chasing you. As it was going on, the magnet was slowing down, and its force was weakening because of all the objects it kept attracting. Finally, the master balls flew out of the magnetic field, and were chasing you at their ususal fast pace. You run into a cave entrance.

Just as the balls enter with you, the entrance caves in. You try diving, but the water is too shallow. You don't have any claws to escape. Just as you think you're done for, the master balls break through the wall of the cave, and are returning to Birch's Lab. You cry a cry of triumph.

Just as you go outside, you see a gas ball. It crashes you, and then eveything slowly gets blurry white. Then you black out. You're locked in a nightmare, where you see spikes below you. You keep falling but never seem to fall into them. Then you wake up.

END of part 8

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Part9

You jump out of Brendan's bed and yawn. You go downstairs and drink from your blue dish. Then you go outside for a walk.

* * *

You're at Verdanturf Town. Just when you're thinking of going to R 118 to go to Fortree, a UFO ( :roll: ) pops up from the 4th dimension and says, "STEP IN HERE?" You think about it, but reluctantly go in.

*sorry, got to go...
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You end up in a world of white. The sky is white. The wildlife is white. The ground is made out of lab coats... LAB COATS?!?!?!?!?!?! You immediately suspect something is suspicious.

You decide to go into a big lab. There are lots of profs with white lab coats... LAB?!?!?! PROFS?!?!?! LAB COATS?!?!?!?!

It's.............SUPER PROF WORLD!!!!!
THE WORLD WHERE ALL ANNOYING PROFS ARE CONTROLLED?!?!?!?!

Suddenly, you spot a big electric programmer. You see the names of Profs from all over the world on a panel!!!! 'This must be what all profs come from and live on!'you think. Finally, you unleash the mega powered punch you sent at Mr. Briney at the machine, and it combusts.
Suddenly, all profs scream,"NOO!!!" and disintegrate into particles. You cry in victory.

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*part 10*

after the victory on super prof world, you are automatically particly teleported to the Kanto Pok

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part 11!

you land back in littleroot.

You decide to explore the back-to-normal-besides-without-Prof. Birch world. You trot here. You pace there. You jump here. You prance there. Then...


[size=150]YOU DIG A HOLE THE SIZE OF MONTR

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