Quite odd. Puncuation, grammar and stuff needs a lot of work. You dialogue is REALLY cheesy, I'd re-do that persoanlly.
"If I want to be a Pokemon Chapion I must find a lendendary pokemon."said Ryo in his head.
Ryo saw some people in Team X.
"So now let's bomb this place right now!"said a Person from Team X.
Ryo wakes up
-Ryo pondered for a minute, Champions have legendary Pokemon, so so must I. Where and how do I get one?
-Ryo caught something in the corner of his eye. Team X! What are they doing here!?
-Ryo overheard the villains, "Let's bomb this place!" they shouted, laughing evilly.
-Ryo shouted, but slumped to the floor, only to wake up hours later.
Notice the difference? Try working on that, but it's nice! Don't worry, I'm just offering my advice.
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