I say this a a Story Rater......
Wow, it has potential but some work should be be done. Your use of the English Language is absurd, I can't understand half of the dialect. Your storyline is great, Covenant coming to Earth. But the spelling, grammar, and terrible use of language really brings it down.
Someone isn't going to scream, "OMG!", they will say, "Oh my God/Oh my Gosh!", one prime example of why my rate for it is going down.
Swearing? Did you think you could get away with it?
Really, creating a story that doesn't even abide by the forum rules is just weird.