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Awww man I thought Dublin was going to have a big affect. Keep up the work though, you're a genius.

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Tue Jul 05, 2005 6:18 pm
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Lintaro, this story just keeps getting better. It could be compared to a giant snowball rolling down a hill; it just keeps gathering more snow, and no one can stop it.

I believe that with your most recent chapter, you have transformed Psypoke's FanFiction forum. Until you came along, it was a desolate place which most people would never even bother to look at. Lintaro, I commend you for reviving this section of the site. You are my inspiration to get out of bed every morning. In fact, I have bookmarked this thread, and every time I come on the computer I check on it in hopes of a wonderful new chapter of the story to read. You are such an intellectual thinker, and I think I speak for all of Psypoke when I say: you inspire us all. In the face of whatever adversity you may come across, please never cease writing, you have a power with words that is indescribable.

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I have 1 word to describe that part, Brilliant.


Wed Jul 06, 2005 10:26 am
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Wow that is wonderful thanks really! :D :D
Next part
As Latios and Latias turned into statues,it passed many years to mock the ruinse's power until the time of Shdow Lugia and Absol.Meanwhile at a ferry there was a boy named Dash,Dash was a pokemon master like Ash but he traveled with his Skarmory in his journeys.
Dublin as he failed to capture the shadow pokemon he used his siencists to create a laser gun to capture Shdow Lugia!
While Dash discovered the whole catastrophy about Shadow Lugia he has a vision about the ruins,at the battle Absol created another tornado that destroyed Dublin Company,as Dublin was mad too!
Dash went to the ruins and he read the part about two stones,he had a red ruby and a blue saphire,he put them near Latios and Latias so they can use the ruinse's magic,suddenly a portal appeared!
Skaaarrmoryyy!!!!said Skarmory,Dash fell into the portal without hope and dissapeared into nowhere.
Lugia had no chice to throw Absol his strong attack,so GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!said Lugia!
Lugia Charged a mega ultra Shadow Thunder!!!!!!
Aaaaaabsoooll!!!!said Absol.


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Wow...I am shocked! Very nice detail and imagination. I mean...truly..the imagination is amazing.

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Very good hopefully the next one will be better

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Whew days pass and I forgot all about my story :(
Sorry guys I didnt mean to dissapoint you :cry: :cry:
Well looking for the next part?
As absol struck from the shadow thunder,Dash was still in the portal,hoping that he would get out he got out at the unown dimension.
It was filled with unowns and the unowns gave Dash a book and in the book there is a picture of suicune and lugia.
It says: Who ever reads this book,he must look,for answers that dont exist,or questions that not exist,search for power,and dont cower.so you can save the world from enternal Darkness.
.................zap................Dash got back into the ruins but the statue of Latias and Latios dissapeared,could it be they have revived? said Dash.
At the battle Lugia destroyed yet another building and absol two buildings!
Latias and Latios got just in time to make a teamwork attack!
The attack was RUBY DRAGON and SAPHIRE DRAGON!
---To be continued-----


Mon Jul 18, 2005 6:46 am
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I couldn't stop reading when I found this topic! You can truly make magic with that keyboard of yours. ^_~ This story is so great. It's filled with action, excitement, and mystery. It's so unique. No one would've ever dared to dream that something like this could of happened in the pokemon world, but here you are making it a reality.

Great job Lintaro, keep it up. It's so good that I never want it to end, but yet... I really want to know the ending! XD

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lintaro this is Outstanding! and the truly amazing part is that you're only nine years old! you should find other places to post your "art" along with psypoke, this is the kind of stuff that truly inspires people! now write more before i beat you up :P jk jk jk

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Amazing :shock: I have fans!! Ok next part! :wink:
The RUBY DRAGON and SAPHIRE DRAGON attacks were super effective!
But Lugia can't control itself lately,Dash went to see the battle and then,Dublin said to Dash: Hm....You are weird kid.
Kraaaaaawk!!said Lugia,as he fired a Shadow Hyper beam!
Zang!!!!Aabsoool!!!Said Absol,launching another razor wind!
Zit!!!!!!Kruaaaaaa!!!!!Kruooooooo!!!!!!Said Latias and Latios!
They fought like they never fought before and boooom!!!!!
They created an explosion!
Suddenly...............The sky turned red and DARK and lots of clouds appeared in the sky!
Dash runned to the battle and he watched how the battle goes...
Lugia had no capacity to hold on,neither Latias and Latios,but Absol was frustrated and fired a shadow ball at Shadow Lugia,Latias and Latios!
Suddenly..........an egg appeared at Dashes hand-to be continued-


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Lintaro your story is great, but i want to know more about these "dark" and "shadow" attacks. what other pokemon can learn mega ultra Shadow Thunder? please....i NEED that move.... :cry:


Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:50 am
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Lintaro... I'm just, absolutely speechless. I'm at a loss for words. This is, hands down, the single greatest piece of literature in the history of the WORLD. Nobody at no point in history has ever written a finer piece of literature. In your most recent chapter, I was immensely captivated by your use of the finest points of the English language. Fact of the matter is, you are so talented that you can actually make up entirely new and legitimate words. Your use of the words "Zang" and "Zit" as exclamations was absolutely breathtaking. You have to get this published, it will make more money on opening day than all the Harry Potter books have made ever - combined.

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Shadowed_Link wrote:
Lintaro your story is great, but i want to know more about these "dark" and "shadow" attacks. what other pokemon can learn mega ultra Shadow Thunder? please....i NEED that move.... :cry:

Well I made up all those attacks
Well this is the last part of Lugia and the catastrophy,I hope you enjoy it!!
The mysterius egg appeared at Dashe's hand,Shadow Lugia and the others were still fighting,the results were catastrophic!
Suddenly.............The egg shone and Flash!!!!!
A huge light appeared in the fight and............trrrrrr........Shadow Lugia turned into Lugia,but..........crack...dam!!!!!!!!!!!
Lugia had no more power left and he fell into the sea leaving nothing but tears.
Flash!!!!The egg hatched into SILVER lugia's son!
SILVER used healing wind and healed Latias and Latios!
Absol was getting very angry he used Razor wind,but SILVER used protect!
Then SILVER said to Dash,Hop on my back!
Dash and SILVER were at the air and,SILVER use Silver wind!!said Dash!
A huge Silver tornado appeared and struck Absol into the sea!
And the whole city was repaired.
...............But.........Latias and Latios got to the sea and took Lugia to the ruins where Dash was.
Lugia turned into stone and Latias and Latios too!
And in the ruins said"THESE BIRDS SAVED US,AND HUMANS AND POKEMON THUS"
Then SILVER promised every year to make a Silver wind at the ruins to revive the story and of course visit Dash again.
Then years passed,Dash was grown up and SILVER too.
------And that was the story of Lugia and the Catastrophy-------
But,did you ever wondered what happnened to Absol? :wink:


Wed Jul 20, 2005 2:38 pm
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This impeccable masterpiece simply cannot be left on such a cliffhanger. I urge you to continue it for the sake of our sanity.


Wed Jul 20, 2005 3:07 pm
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Well the story is finished but I have got news!
See my sig of Lugia and the catastrophy,go to Lintaro's five star chop on fan fiction and there you can ask a free sig of Lugia five diffrent models!!


Wed Jul 20, 2005 3:29 pm
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:o *gasp* It's over? Goodness... it was so fantastic, but I wish there was more to read. You must create a sequel! Quickly, quickly! Hop to it! I don't want it to be over! >_< Not yet!

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Stay calm,tomorrow I will make another story as good as this one! :wink:
Good news!!!
I have come up of another story!
It is called Pokemon Movile,the curse of Kadabra!
As our hero Dash met SILVER Lugia's son he travel's to a high-tech city called Indigo city.
There he met a girl called Allison,she told Dash that there will be a convention of a pokemon Movile.
:? What is a pokemon movile,said Dash.
A pokemon Movile is a Huge Laboratory connected to this city and the forest.Said Alisson.
......Dash went to the convention with Alisson,and there they met Gx.
Gx is the pokemon professor who created the pokemon movile and he said that they will test a magnitism machine on the movile.
In the convention Gx turned on the machine and zzzzztttttt.....chrak.....zzzztt...charak......!!!
a huge electricity force field appeared and .................shoooooo....Gx turned off the machine.
Meanwhile at the forest where the Movile was connected,there was a pokemon Graveyard,.........then.....slash.......a hand appeared out of its Grave----to be continued---


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