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 The Way the Wind Blows (contains violence, not for children) 
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Okay I'm trying a new, more serious fanfic, it's a Zeld fanfic to but it's pretty viollent (hence the title) so for those of you who aren't 13 or older please don't read this! ^^;;

The Legend

In the land a Golden Power lies hidden from mortal eyes.

The Golden Power was said to contain the power of the Gods.
Until one day a man of great evil murderd the king of the Land and clammed the power for himself.
It is said that when hope seems to have vanished, a Heros will appear.
Weilding the Sword of Evil's Bane the hero will destroy the evil within the Golden Power.
No just using the Sword of Evil's Bane but the power of the beast within.
And save the kingdom from annihilation.

Chapter I: The Beginning

It was raining, and it was very very dark. But that barely mattered to Link, he had been in this kind of weather since that night...

*flashback*
Link used to live with his uncle Furgus (random name, don't ask.) and his uncle was an excellent swordsman. But one day the soldier that partolled the boarders of the castle, turned evil. Furgus went to investigate, when he didn't come back before dinner Link went out and searched for him. He managed to get to the castle and them he saw his uncle lying on the ground, he was bleeding, and he had a large stab would through his stomach.

"...Link..." he spoke softly as the boy tried to get him on his feet, "...Link.. I'm to hurt... you... can't save... me..." Furgus mumbled, "No, uncle you'll be okay!" Link said now trying to wrap the wound with a peice of cloth that he ripped off his shirt, "...Link you were always... like... a......son... to... me..." Furgus said, smiling, "You were always like a father to me." Link replied now holding the dying man's hand. "Link... I want you to take my favorite sword..." Furgus said, "Take care of... the... house... and make sure... to" he gasped for air, "protect... the shard..." Link had no idea what he was talking about, "Uncle... you'll be okay..." said Link who now was crying, "Link... good bye...." Furgus said as his dying words.

"Hmph... he was a weak old man." said someone from behind, Link turned to see a large man tower over him, "He barely put up a desent fight." he said. Link became very angry from these comments, "He was a great swordsman!" Link yelled, the man merely stared at the boy, Link picked up his uncles sword, "You could never be as good a swordsman as he was!" Link cahrged at the man, who then picked up Link by the throat, "Don't patronize me kid." the man said while holding Link in his face, "Or you might get hurt." Link angerly flailed as the man held him up, the man stared at him for a moment, and then he tossed Link aside, adn walked into the castle.
*end flashback*

That was seven years ago... and ever since then Link praticed fighting, so if he ever would come across that man's path he could avenge his uncle.

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That's chapter one! Wow it's like four paragraphs long too! I'm suprised I wrote that much!


Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:03 pm
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CHAPTER II: The Hunt

Link slowly walked up to a house, this is were his employer lived, as he walked in he heard a scream. Link drew his sword and ran towards it, he entered the room were the scream came from and saw several corpses. Then he heard a growl from behind him he turned to see a large wolf, larger than any normal wolf. The wolf jumped at him, Link was thrown down onto his back with the wolf's claws and teeth only being blocked by his sword.

Link tossed the wolf over his head as hard as he could and it was flung through the window. Link got up and jumped out the window after it.(he's still only on the first floor) the wolf was fast and Link lost sight of it eventually, but he had a good idea of where it went, the Deku forest/

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Hmmm, no replies yet? oh well that okay, it probably not goin to get good until the next chapter.


Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:52 am
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sorry for kinda doing a triple post here but you know I want poepl to know that there is a new chapter up.

CHAPTER III (unamed because I couldn't think of a nice one XD)

The forest was quieter than normal, the bird were not singing and the forest children, Kokiri, could not be seen playing anywhere. "something's wrong" thought Link as hae slowly walked around. "could it be that wolf?" he thought to himself.

He then heard rustling in the bushes behind him, he swiftly turned. He then saw a disturing sight. A Kokiri lay before him dead, blood oozed from his mouth and one of it's arms was ripped off.

Link turned away in disgust, "Who would do that to a innocent Kokiri?" Link muttered, he then heard more rustling, he turnned and saw the wolf he had been chasing, it looked at the dea Kokiri and then stared right into Link's eyes. It barked and jumped at him, Link dodged to the side just in time and rew his sword, the wolf cicled Link, and then again jumped at him, he was tackled down to the ground and was bitten in the arm.

"GRRRAAAAARGGHH!" Link screamed in pain and then he swung at the wolf the blade slashed the wolf's chest, the wolf then ran into the bushes agian. Link sat there and held his arm were he had been bit, he cursed the wolf and then he slowly got up, and he left the forest.


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Lots of action, I like it! very dramatic.
7/10


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I like it you should continue it if you can 7.8/10

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Well I can't really because I don't have the time to do it. When I do I'll continue it.


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Very well written. The whole Medieval feeling appeals to me. 9/10

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