Hm, 10 pages in Microsoft Word, that's long enough for sure. Lenght doesn't really matter, though, as long as it's not crap (we have excelents short one-shots and terrible testaments in this Forum). Just divide it into parts or something (make each one of them the lenght of a Microsoft Word page I reckon), and wait for the feedback (don't post the whole story at once, I mean).
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