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heres part eighteen thanks for the reviews:

The next morning jamie and misty had slept in so martin decided to check on them, martin knocked on the door but there was no answer so he decided to go in, he opened the door and saw jamie and misty asleep in the same bed and jamie had his arm around misty, at that moment eevee woke up and walked over to martin,


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right mmmhmmm,i bet nothing happened :wink: :roll:


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Wed May 18, 2005 8:30 pm
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heres part nineteen, please review:

As jamie and misty entered the hospital, ash was already stood there waiting for them with pikachu on his shoulder,


Thu May 19, 2005 12:07 am
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0_0 did you have to leave us on the edge :cry: :( :oops:

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heres part twenty, and don't worry all questions will be answered:



Sun May 22, 2005 2:17 am
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i like that one...pretty good,as usual(if it was bad than you wouldnt be posting it....lol,like mine.. :roll: )

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aaaawwwww thanks darkmage


Tue May 24, 2005 3:01 am
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heres part twenty-one thanks for the reviews:

Misty rang the bell on the gym doors and her sister violet answered,


Tue May 24, 2005 9:12 am
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awwww,family reunoin..

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Keep it coming J! don't forget the {ditto} 's!!!! Can't wait 4 it!

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is this gonna contimue?i really liked it....it was awsome and there r no other storys anymore

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yes, but i am busy at the moment


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hi, sorry i've been gone for so long (lot of schoolwork) but here is part twenty-two, please review, hey that rhymes:

As they entered cerulean they decided to take a break and all sat down near to the fountain in the center of the market and ash, martin, brock and jamie started talking while misty went and had a look around the stands,


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sort but good :D

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heres part twenty-three, please review:


Jamie, martin, misty, brock and ash had been walking for over 2 hours and had still not seen one pokemon,


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awww,poor poochyena's :cry:

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Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:37 am
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i might not post for a while, i had finished it upto the pokemon league and some smeggers deleted it, i can swear my computers being hacked because this has happened three times, so i have to do it all again, luckily i can remember exactly what happens.


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i guess u should write it on paper then..that sucks!!it must have been like 500 episodes :cry:

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505 to be exact


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holy crap!!!u must have spent like 500 hours doin it!!that sux :cry:

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heres part twenty-four:

Jamie, martin, misty, ash and brock had been walking for the about 5 hours excluding a brief stop in cerulean city and it was starting to get dark so they decided to set up camp,


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umm okay......thatwasreallyfunny :lol:

9.11-ish?

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THEN STEVEN JUMPS OUT OF THE BUSH WITH A KNIFE!

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no kryten, i've done that a bit later


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steven jumps out of a bush with a knife?!?!thats wierd

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