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Well since I just know noticed this section so I'll start a story :D

Some stuff you'll need to know...

Characters:
Red: The boy from FR & LG, is not very bright.
Blue: The Rival from FR & LG, knows everything to know about pokemon.

Setting:
Kanto & Sevii Islands

And now the story:

Part I:
Mom: Red, Prof. Oak wants to see you.
Red: Why?
Mom: I don't know, just go see him.
Red: Alright it's not like there's anything to do here...
Mom: What did you say? :evil:
Red: Nothing! *leaves house*
Red walks to Prof. Oaks lab
Blue: Red? What are you doing here?
Red: Your Grandpa wanted to see me.
Blue: Well, he's not here, he probably went to Viridian City to get his order from the PokeMart.
Red: Well go find him
Blue: Whatever.
Red walks to the edge of Pallet Town
Voice: Wait! Don't leave town!
Red turns around to see Prof. Oak running to him.
Oak:Wild pokemon live in tall grass! You'll need your own pokemon for protection! Here come with me!
Red follows Prof. Oak to his lab
Blue: Gramps! Your here, finally!
Oak: Blue? Oh, yeah you were suppose to come today, anyways Red do you see those Pokeballs on the table? Pick one, they contain rare pokemon.
Red: Really!?! Wow! A pokemon!
Blue: What about me!!?!! :(
Oak: You'll pick after Red, so shut up.
Red looks a the pokeballs
Red: what do they have in them?
Oak: The first one has the Grass pokemon Bulbasaur, the second Charmander a Fire pokemon, and the third has the WAter pokemon Squirtle.
Red: Oh. Um, I guess I'll pick Charmander
Blue runs over and picks the pokeball with Squirtle
Blue: heh, I'll pick this one. Hey Red let's see how well you battle. :twisted:
Red: Alright let's go!

[Rival Blue would like to battle!]
[Rival Blue sent out Squirtle!]
Squirtle: Squirtle!
Red: Go! Charmander!
Charmander: Char!
Oak: Oh for pete's sake, Blue why do you have to start a battle in my lab?
Blue: Shut up I'm battling!
Oak: If you break anything I'll make sure you don't battle in here again!! :evil:
Blue: Alright! Let's get this battle started Red!
Red: Fine, Charmander use Scratch!
[Charmander used Scratch]
Squirtle: Squuuuirt!
Blue: Squirtle use Tackle!
[Squirtle use Tackle]
Charmander: Der!!
Red: Uh, use Scratch again!
[Charmander used Scratch]
Squirtle: Squirtle!
Blue: Squirtle use Tackle!
[Squirtle used Tackle]
Charmander: Char!
Red: Use Scratch!
[Charmander used Scratch]
[Critical Hit!]
[Squirtle fainted]
Blue: What!?! I picked the wrong pokemon!! :evil:
[Blue handed over 80


Sat Apr 16, 2005 9:08 pm
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*Claps* Nice to have the beginning to the original red and blue. With the extra :evil: and shut ups lol Good for a first episode! Love it. 8/10

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Very funny. A good twist of the beginning of the game. Adds a good bit of humour. I like it!

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Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:37 am
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Thanx for the replies, I'm working on the second part so be patient.


Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:47 am
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Part II: To Viridian City & back again!

Review: Read first post of thread

Oak: Red, I think you may have what it akes to beat the pokemon league.
Red: You do?
Oak: Yes, but to get there you'll need badges from the eigh gym leaders.
Red: I do?
Oak: Yep, the nearest gym is in Viridian City, I suggest you go there. Now, I need a nap bye!
Prof. Oak pulls a bed out his wall and starts sleeping
Red: Okay... :? *leaves*
Red goes to Route 1 and finds a PokeMart employee
Employee: Hey kid, where you going?
Red: To Viridian City
Employee: When your there you should stop by the PokeMart.
Red: Why?
Employee: They hired me to advertise them and give out free samples, here have a Potion
[Red recieved a Potion]
Employee: Visit our store in Viridian City.
Red: Okay :? *walks away*
Red walks near Viridian City & is jumped by a wild Pidgey

[Wild Pidgey appeared!]
Red: What the F***!?!
[Wild Pidgey used Tackle!]
Red: Ow! Stupid Bird! Go Charmander!
Charmander: Char!
Red: Charmander use Scratch!
[Charmander used Scratch]
Pidgey: Cooo!
[Wild Pidgey used Tackle!]
Charmander: Char!
Red: Charmander use Scratch!
[Charmander used Scratch]
[Wild Pidgey fainted!]
Red: Stupid bird! Don't go Tackling people for no reason!

Red arrives in Viridian City
Red: Now where was I suppose to go?
[Reds memory: Employee: You should stop by the PokeMart.]
Red: Oh yeah! Now I remember
Red finds the PokeMart and walks in
Employee: Hey kid! Did you come from Pallet town?
Red: Me? Yeah.
Employee: Do you know Prof. Oak?
Red: Yeah.
Employee: Here give this to him
[Red received Oak's Parcel]
Employee: say hi to Prof. Oak fo me!
Red: Okay... :? *leaves*
Red walks back to Pallet Town & goes to Prof. Oak's Lab
Oak: Red? Why are you here?
Red: This dude wanted me to give you this box.
[Red handed over Oak's Parcel]
Oak: Oh! This is the Master Ball I ordered.
Red: A what?
Oak: :shock: Nothing!! *hides Master Ball*
Voice: Gramps!
Oak: Ah, Blue, your here!
Blue: Yeah what did ya want?
Oak: Well, since your both here I'll give you these.
[Red & Blue both got a Pokedex]
Oak: It records data on pokemon you've caught, I'm to old to fill it so could you do it for me?
Red: Okay, hey do they play MP3s?
Oak: I don't know, I didn't make them, I haven't even used them.
Blue: Well, Red let me know when you figure out how to make it play MP3s I'll go fill it. So smell ya later!
Blue leaves the lab.
Red: Hey you can play Supre Mario Bros. on it!
Oak: That headache's back...


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That was good and hilarious.

Quote:
Oak: Oh! This is the Master Ball I ordered.
Red: A what?
Oak: Nothing!! *hides Master Ball*


And

Quote:
Red: Okay, hey do they play MP3s?
Oak: I don't know, I didn't make them, I haven't even used them.
Blue: Well, Red let me know when you figure out how to make it play MP3s I'll go fill it. So smell ya later!
Blue leaves the lab.
Red: Hey you can play Supre Mario Bros. on it!
Oak: That headache's back...


Were the funniest parts. Keep up the good work. :)

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I'd knew you guys would like it! Part III will be posted tomorrow.


Sun Apr 17, 2005 11:06 am
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ShadowFlygon wrote:
I'd knew you guys would like it! Part III will be posted tomorrow.

Can't wait
Hahahahahahahahaha hilarious I swear especcially the F***!? But instead of the answer 'yea' to the pokemon mart person asing 'do you know prof oak' let this happen.

Worker: Do you know professor Oak?
Red: Erm no?
hehehehe soz just getting ahead of myself
Im loving your story 9/10

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Hilarious, great job. I like the humor.

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awsome |)00|) keep it up :D u should have mewtwo jump red and steal the potion he got from the mart |)00|). 8) :!:

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First off, xeno, legendaries only appear where they are suppose to, Including all the Jhoto legendaries & Mew on World Edge Island.

Anyway:

Part III: Back to Viridian City

Previously on Pokemon Kanto Journeys:
Red received Charmander from Porf. Oak
Red defeated Blue with Charmander & barely won!
Red arrived in Viridian City
Red received the Pokedex from Prof. Oak & figured out that you can play Super Mario Bros. on it

And now Pokemon Kanto Journeys:

~~~At Prof. Oak


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Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:43 pm
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pretty good... a tad bit vulgar, but i guess it's okay with that. sorta parallels alongside my hoenn adventure story. i'll give it an 8/10, i woulda given it 9/10 but the profanity kinda sounded mean, although humorous 8)

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I'm sorry if you thought it was mean, and yeah it kinda does parallel your story... well you know one big difference, it doesn't have the girl trainer(yet) & it doesn't have Hoenn pokemon and it & will take many turns for the worst & well it's different. Well anyway, I edited the story better now?


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Quote:
Edited cause I made the Old Man sound like a pethetic loser.



Doesn't matter he still is one. Loving your story.

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Too tired to type part IV so I'll post it tomorrow.


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It is FANTASTIC!!! Can't wait for more! :hungry:

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Here it is Part IV!!!

Part IV: Viridian Forest

Preveiously:

Red got the Kanto Map
Red bought coffee for 50


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This is possibly the funniest story here in the board of fanfic. Especcially things like the Starbucks coffee etc...

Keep it up dude

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Heh Heh still hilarious. I love

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Caterpie: Piee!!!!!!!


I never knew caterpie liked pie!

Keep it up man, this is where i turn for pokemon related comedy

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