Hi everyone! This is my first post ever in the library so im glad im here!
So anyways, this is s story I wrote a year ago and I thought you guys might want to see it!
Note: Pronouciation: Lumentia: Lum. ent. chia > people got confused.
Well, here it is:
If we could see the future, would we see a family? A home? A life?
Lumentia thought this as she floated through the dark endless abyss. She opened her eyes.
"I see a bright light." Lumentia said softly.
"Uugghh..." Lumentia slowly regained coinessness.
"Wh-Where am I?" Lumentia looked around. She woke up it a field with a couple of trees.
"How could this happen I don't remember anything." Lumentia said to herself.
"Hey you, you in the blue robe!"
Lumentia turned around. The person who called her was a boy, around the age of 12, same as her. He had a, what looked like a enchanted sword, strapped to his back. He had brown hair and brown eyes. He studied her.
Lumentia had lond blonde hair and sparkling blue eyes. She was quite skinny. He robe had a black line at the ends of her sleeves and at the bottom of her robe. She had midnight blue ribbons on the both sides of her hair with a cresent moon where the knot should be. In her had was her lunar septar, that was encrusted with blue saphires.
"Hi what's your name?" the boy asked.
Thats sorta 1/3 of chapter one! Tell me what you think!