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My corner: So, this is my procrastinating while working on another story. I honestly had no idea what I was writing at first, but it came together. I tried to make one of the characters a guy but they simply insisted on being a girl. *shrug* I swear they have a life of their own some times. This is a one shot by the way, and it's probably G [or E, whichever you prefer]. I hope you enjoy.

Edit: This is a one-shot.

<p align="center">Medication</p>
"You make no sense sometimes, you know that right?" Sometimes that girl just made me want to kill myself.

"You shouldn't say such nasty things." She retorted with an overly cheerful smile.

I raised a brow at her, "It was honest not nasty."

"Why can't it be both?"

I hesitated, what could I say to that? It's true it could be both, but I didn't want it to be. "It just can't."

"Well," She began, "That's no fun." She flipped her perfect blonde hair over her shoulder. I wanted to burn that hair, just to make her imperfect. I nearly laughed, in the back of my mind I knew she really didn't look like that. In the back of my mind, I knew...

I shrugged my shoulders, too bad so sad. I didn't care if it wasn't fun, it was just the way it worked. I looked at her somberly for a moment. "You know they're going to make me go away."

She seemed alarmed for the first time in years, that smile was off of her cherub face. Her lips curled into a snarl, "I won't let them."

"You don't get a choice." I said evenly, I knew they were watching. Maybe they weren't here in person, but I knew they were watching.

Her hand flashed out and grabbed my bicep. "I won't let you go."

"I have to go," I said more forcefully. She didn't understand I knew that. To her, I was everything.

Fury burned in those bright blue eyes, "No." It was simple, and it was forceful.

"I'm going to go," I insisted. I didn't care if she wouldn't be happy about it, it was for the best. She could hate me, but in the end it would be better for her. I pried her hand away from me and held both of her small wrists in my large hands. "You know they won't let me stay."

She stared up at me in disbelief; she didn't honestly think they were going to let me stay did she? Of course she did. I leaned closer, and the perfection I had always seen in her faded away. Her eyes were dull, skin sickly pale, her bones sticking out sharply, dark bags under her eyes, and her hair was knotted and had lost its luster a long time ago. I leaned closer still, until my mouth was right next to her ear.

I whispered, oh so quietly, so she would be the only one to ever hear the words that came out of my mouth then. "After all, I'm only a hallucination."

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Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:52 pm
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I like your story ,it's actually one of the better ones on the site.I was looking around and some of the stuff I saw ....terrible. Anyways,I'm looking forward to what happens next, yopou should defenitly continue.Some of your description is vauge,so mabey you could descibe the people,setting..and so on some more ,but otherwise very good.

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I don't doubt that you've seen such stories here. This is a one-shot, so there will be no more to this story.

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This is probibly my fave one shots you've done it's either this or irene hmm I sound like a fan? Could such a thing be true? :?

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Hey, Crimson deserves fans.


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That makes me feel special! Knowing your decent and hearing it are totally different things.

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loved it

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Now THIS I loved. Not as deppressing as Marionette yet stil contains the same intense emotion. I didn't get the first part though, you could probably cut it out up too "You know they're going to make me go away" and start it that way. I still thought it was excellent, 9/10.

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