Awesome work, I like it a lot ^_^ A very nice writing style, and excellent spelling and grammar, that's the way to go!
Three thumbs up, keep it up!
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| Author: | Banov [ Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Forgotten Son (Ch.7 Added 8-4-06) |
Welcome to 'The Forgotten Son'- or TFS. Within this forst post I'll include (1) The Table of Contents, (2) The Prologue (you can't skip this if you hope to understand the story), and (3) The PM List- as part of the list you'll recieve a reminder whenever I post a new chapter. So, if you want to be PMed whenever I update... tell me. And I will. I'm posting this on every forum in which TFS is updated, as well as editing it into the first post in every forum. Throughout my posting of the story various grammar mistakes have and will be found and altered; for the sake of simplicity the final version of every chapter will be found here. I'll go back over old chapters once in a while here to edit and alter grammar and structure mistakes, and overall if you're new to the story or plan to read over old chapters again, the given link is the 'official' compiling of all of the most up-to-date versions of each chapter. Feel free to post reviews there in addition to or instead of at this forum, and please feel more than welcome to point out every grammar mistake you can there so that it can be fixed. I'm not always going to catch every single one... Table of Contents -------------------------- Chapter 1: Weak (The post just below this.) Chapter 2: Not So Bad (A little farther down than chapter one) Chapter 3: Smile For You (Pretty far down, but easy to spot as the thrid giant block of text) Chapter 4: Turn for the Better (Bottom of this page) Chapter 5: Teeter-Totter (Close to the top of page two) Chapter 6: Through the Darkness (A few posts down from ch. 5) Chapter 7: Through the Darkness II -------------------------- Prologue ---------------------------------- He |
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| Author: | Banov [ Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:17 pm ] |
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Sorry for the double post, but I did this for the sake of having my chapters a little organized. From here on, I'll post updates every Friday. If you like what you read, please continue to read and tell me what you think! Chapter 1 ------------------------------------------------- |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:02 am ] |
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I never got his payment lol. Pretty good length for a first chapter. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Little cheesy on the "People hate weak pokemon" plot, but it's still pretty good. Hurray for Silver cameo. 9.5/10 |
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| Author: | Banov [ Wed Jun 07, 2006 6:15 am ] |
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Thanks for the review! Anyone else...? |
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| Author: | dragonfan149 [ Wed Jun 07, 2006 2:45 pm ] |
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I like it; you should continue. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:30 am ] |
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Yup! Every Friday. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:11 am ] |
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Happy Friday! Chapter 2 --------------------------------------- Once the red-haired boy disappeared over the horizon, Luke gave the magikarp a tight hug. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:05 am ] |
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Please... someone... review it..... |
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| Author: | Flarey [ Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:57 am ] |
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Awesome work, I like it a lot ^_^ A very nice writing style, and excellent spelling and grammar, that's the way to go! Three thumbs up, keep it up!
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| Author: | Banov [ Sat Jun 10, 2006 10:49 am ] |
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Three thumbs up? Ouch... I feel bad for the poor guy whose thumb you stole >_o Thankies for the comments though! Now I can die happy ^___^ |
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| Author: | Sneaky Sneasel [ Sat Jun 10, 2006 3:26 pm ] |
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This is definetely one of the better fan-fics I've read. Keep up the good work. 
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| Author: | Banov [ Sat Jun 10, 2006 3:28 pm ] |
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I plan to! Chapter three's already written, And I'm putting it up on Friday. Please read it then! |
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| Author: | Orange_Flaaffy [ Wed Jun 14, 2006 11:31 pm ] |
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Well, it's nice that you can write so fast. I sure would not be able that 
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| Author: | Banov [ Thu Jun 15, 2006 1:37 pm ] |
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I have/had a bunch of chapters written in advance.... Tomorrow's chapter marks my last pre-written one. |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Fri Jun 16, 2006 7:31 am ] |
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What? You have other things to do than ensure we are provided with free entertainment? How dare you! 
Keep up the chapter writing Banov, can't wait for #3. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Fri Jun 16, 2006 9:14 am ] |
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Good thing, too, because you won't have to. Chapter 3 ---------------------------------- The idea of being allowed to battle brought new life to many of Luke |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:35 am ] |
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Hurray I didn't have to wait. Let's see if this works again. I can't wait to have hundreds of beautiful women lusting after me. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Mon Jun 19, 2006 11:10 am ] |
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... Is anyone else going to comment?! |
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| Author: | Banov [ Tue Jun 20, 2006 1:59 pm ] |
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. . . . I really hope that someone besides Dave read chapter four, because otherwise I'm moving forward without you... Chapter Four --------------------------- As Luke and his team traveled back home, Luke couldn |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Tue Jun 20, 2006 3:16 pm ] |
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Go Luke. Beating off a nidoran and flirting with a girl all in the same day. |
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| Author: | Sneaky Sneasel [ Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:06 pm ] |
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I read it too...and it was good. A few mistakes in spelling/grammar, but other than that, just splendid. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:51 am ] |
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S/G Mistakes? Awwww man, I thought I caught them all this time >_o Oh well, at least the plot's all good. Chapter five should be up Friday, but it may not be up until Tuesday. |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:44 am ] |
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Somewhere you spelled 'all' 'al'. |
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| Author: | Banov [ Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:04 am ] |
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Oops. Oh well :p |
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| Author: | Psyches [ Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:32 pm ] |
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It's friday... WHERE'S THE NEW CHAPTER!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS MAN!!! |
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