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THE ADVENTUREs OF MUDKIP!!! Read it NOW!!!!!
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Author:  Crimson [ Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:36 pm ]
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I agree Psyches. And Youkou, it's "you don't have to post" not "don't post if you don't like it."
Author:  The Obsidian Wolf [ Thu Sep 20, 2007 2:49 am ]
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Youkou no Mugon wrote:
If you don't like the fanfic, then don't bother posting on it, Psyches


I beleive the idea of the Fanfic section is here for people to post their stories for critique. That rather includes peoples opinions. Here's mine:

1) Where the hell did Magnogroos come into any of this? The thing just appeared, and there isn't even a plot. I had just read Psyches' parody on this and thought to myself, 'surely this can't be that bad,' but I realise now that it is.

There is no plot.

There is no humour.

There is no tension.

Any action is lost because it has none of the above.

Please, just stop writing and clogging up this topic with noobish replies of "ZOMG I LARFED, IT R WELL FUNNEE" because they're probably doing it for the sake of posting, because it isn't in the least bit humourous.

Sorry, but you've recieved critique from other writers and you haven't taken it into account, hence my bluntness.
Author:  DNA [ Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:07 am ]
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Actually it was funny, up to a certain point.
I stopped reading it when I got to zombie Birch clones, and then I said 'wtf, this is cr@p, I'm not reading this anymore'.

Seriously, enough with the randomness. The story died long ago. It's just subsisting now. It's driving me, and a lot of others, crazy.

- DNA
Author:  Ghost Writer [ Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:06 pm ]
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Youkou no Mugon wrote:
If you don't like the fanfic, then don't bother posting on it, Psyches


If you have nothing intelligent to say, then don't say it at all, Youkou.

*ahem* I've posted once in this little "fan fic", expressing an extreme dislike at the use of emoticons. And I got a lame excuse back saying that apparently, the mudkip or marshtomp or WHATEVER it is wouldn't know what Sinnoh Pokemon look like. But I do believe that it was a lazy attempt to get out of describing something.

Also, wtf? Magnagross? *rolls eyes*

And another thing. That last "chapter" was too short. WAY too short.

And this story is going nowhere. Just STOP WRITING BEFORE SOMEBODY GOUGES OUT THEIR EYES WITH A SHARPENED SPATULA! [/rant]

I wish people didn't say this was the best thing they ever read, because it only prooves my theory that a lot of the readers here are simple minded, and they like stories they don't have to think about, and is just a random garble of events.
Author:  Youkou no Mugon [ Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:07 pm ]
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<.< What can I say? I've always liked randomness and Pokemon.
Sure, it's not the best fanfic there is, but hey, it's unique and original. You can't bash it for that.
Author:  AABM [ Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:48 pm ]
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I guess having such an argument (if I may call it so) is nonuse, some people may find this fiction a piece of kr@ppe, maybe others find it totally amusing, I personally mind not. What I think is that leaving this fiction be is decition of the writer himself and leaving it be won´t harm anybody.

Sure, many people may get a wrong or equivocal angle of this library, but also many others would find this place nule or amusing. Come what ever may, I care not, I have friends around here who know I´m a decent writer, as well as themselves.

I suggest to leave this popular story to "Develop" until it finally ends, no matter how absurd/random/weird/amusing/free-of-sense it gets, I´d really rather just focus on my plot and developing my own story regardless of how this fic is coming along in any way.

I´m not going to negate the fact that this fiction is creative to a certain degree, but the only one who may promote or arrest the development (and/or improvement) of this story is its own writer.

With this, I´ll leave this story flourish or rot. Anyways, I wish good luck to elite42 and many other writers who think they have the talent of writing but need to polish it up (or definitely lack any).
Author:  Galar [ Fri Sep 21, 2007 8:42 am ]
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Indeed there's a lot to be improved. I don't know why I haven't locked this fanfic before, since we've been doing that for sometime to similar topics.

~Locked
Author:  Gnaaye [ Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:13 am ]
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Umm, locked? This topic is still open (since I am posting).

Delete this post when you actually lock (or better, delete) the topic
Author:  Galar [ Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:32 am ]
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I tend to do this a lot. I post "Locked" and forget to lock.
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