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Author:  Darth DLA [ Fri Sep 30, 2005 11:27 am ]
Post subject:  Asten a pokemon Fan Fiction

I made part of a fan fic. what do you think?

Chapter 1
Overboard
The large waves rocked the entire ship. Asten woke as the ship was hit buy a huge wave. He quickly got his raincoat on and grabbed his pokeballs. He would be needed on deck. The storm wasn

Author:  Jodi [ Fri Sep 30, 2005 11:33 am ]
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Neat, do you write much?
I don't think that should be all of a chapter, it was rather short.
Keep writing!

Author:  Darth DLA [ Sat Oct 01, 2005 8:12 pm ]
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Ok chapter 1 continued.

The man recovered after a few hours. Although it was apparent he had caught a cold. Asten asked him what his name was. He replied:

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