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Pokemon Ranger
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Location: Hiding under my rock, writing something new.
I started this topic, because I'm a overreacting, paranoid, teenager with a very sad, intense love of Pokemon and creating stories. I worry that (almost) no-one likes my story, Forest of Secrets, because I got only one comment on it. Is it bad, this lack of comments? I don't know, so the psychocpathically paranoid part of my mind is freaking out. So, this topic is just that I'm asking for and want brutal crit on my work. Tell me it's horrible, as long as you say why. Perhaps the comments ought to be limited to a separate topic like this anyways, so they don't get in the way of my story.

Help me.

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Wed Sep 04, 2013 2:55 pm
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Ace Trainer
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The people over at notebookinhand.com are good at judging works of art/literature/cross-stitching/ferrets and provide helpful tips. You might want to try over there on a forum dedicated to creativity.

Your story is fine, quit worrying yourself.

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