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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part eighteen thanks for the reviews:
The next morning jamie and misty had slept in so martin decided to check on them, martin knocked on the door but there was no answer so he decided to go in, he opened the door and saw jamie and misty asleep in the same bed and jamie had his arm around misty, at that moment eevee woke up and walked over to martin,
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darkmagician2523
Ace Trainer
Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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right mmmhmmm,i bet nothing happened :roll:
9.2/10
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Wed May 18, 2005 8:30 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part nineteen, please review:
As jamie and misty entered the hospital, ash was already stood there waiting for them with pikachu on his shoulder,
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Thu May 19, 2005 12:07 am |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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0_0 did you have to leave us on the edge
8.5/10
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Thu May 19, 2005 7:34 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part twenty, and don't worry all questions will be answered:
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Sun May 22, 2005 2:17 am |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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i like that one...pretty good,as usual(if it was bad than you wouldnt be posting it....lol,like mine.. :roll: )
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Mon May 23, 2005 8:15 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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aaaawwwww thanks darkmage
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Tue May 24, 2005 3:01 am |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part twenty-one thanks for the reviews:
Misty rang the bell on the gym doors and her sister violet answered,
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Tue May 24, 2005 9:12 am |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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awwww,family reunoin..
9.60/10
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Tue May 24, 2005 11:15 am |
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Kryten
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:09 am Posts: 974 Location: England, UK 3497 Psybucks
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Keep it coming J! don't forget the 's!!!! Can't wait 4 it!
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Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:28 am |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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is this gonna contimue?i really liked it....it was awsome and there r no other storys anymore
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Thu Jun 02, 2005 7:57 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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yes, but i am busy at the moment
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Fri Jun 03, 2005 2:40 am |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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hi, sorry i've been gone for so long (lot of schoolwork) but here is part twenty-two, please review, hey that rhymes:
As they entered cerulean they decided to take a break and all sat down near to the fountain in the center of the market and ash, martin, brock and jamie started talking while misty went and had a look around the stands,
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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sort but good
9.5/10
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Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:02 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part twenty-three, please review:
Jamie, martin, misty, brock and ash had been walking for over 2 hours and had still not seen one pokemon,
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:51 am |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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awww,poor poochyena's
9.5/10
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:37 am |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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i might not post for a while, i had finished it upto the pokemon league and some smeggers deleted it, i can swear my computers being hacked because this has happened three times, so i have to do it all again, luckily i can remember exactly what happens.
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 1:14 pm |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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i guess u should write it on paper then..that sucks!!it must have been like 500 episodes
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:54 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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505 to be exact
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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holy crap!!!u must have spent like 500 hours doin it!!that sux
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:33 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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heres part twenty-four:
Jamie, martin, misty, ash and brock had been walking for the about 5 hours excluding a brief stop in cerulean city and it was starting to get dark so they decided to set up camp,
Last edited by 2x4b on Tue Jul 05, 2005 1:29 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 12:48 pm |
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darkmagician2523
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Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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umm okay......thatwasreallyfunny
9.11-ish?
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 8:13 pm |
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Kryten
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:09 am Posts: 974 Location: England, UK 3497 Psybucks
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THEN STEVEN JUMPS OUT OF THE BUSH WITH A KNIFE!
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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no kryten, i've done that a bit later
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 11:37 am |
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darkmagician2523
Ace Trainer
Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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steven jumps out of a bush with a knife?!?!thats wierd
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