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 The Face of Earth (working title) 
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One of the summer assignments for my English course next year is to write a good prologue from which we have a story planned out. This is what I came up with in the middle of the night, the working title for the story being "The Face of Earth." Hope you enjoy. =]



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I swear, if one of those guys said "the cake is a lie" one more time, all of their a$$e$ woulda been mine.

'Das my brother. >=]

Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:22 am
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I'm an absolute maniac when it comes to grammar/punctuation so this will be long, bear with me. :twisted:

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the freshly mown lawn stained with blood, the front door broken in half, also stained

This could be better, you could add a little more description and change it to something like, '...the front door was broken in half, blood slowly dripped down the mahogany frame.' It

People ask me why I do all these wierd things.I tell them I have a heart of a little boy, which I keep in my desk.

Once there was a man who ate a poisonous grapefruit and died.The moral of the story:DON'T EAT POISON GRAPEFRUIT!!

I reject your reality and substitute my own.

Sat Jun 28, 2008 11:01 am
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uhh... yeah... what he said. How ever I think this would make a good story, just ease up on the carnage, your going for a shock and awe effect and it doesn't suit you. but I incourage and dare you to build on this story :wink:

A flea and fly in a flue, Were imprisoned so what could they do? Said the flea let us fly. Said the fly let us flee. So they flew through a flaw in the flue.

Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:20 pm
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