Okay my uncle was in a car accident a couple days ago. As serious as it was everyone was okay but I didn't know that so i wrote down what i thought had happened at the time on my blackberry in story mode I call it Impact effect. (Side note don't forget to look for the silence coming soon to a forum near you)

My family and I were riding to the bank, it was a beautiful day. The robin's were making the noise that they ocasionally do and some kids were playing alongside the street, I was listening to my faverite song on the radio. Just then I heard a screeching sound and when i turned and looked it was to. late. There was impact.

My kids were crying one was gashing at the head the other had a bruised arm. But nothing life threatining.

My wife was seriously injured, it looked like she had taken most of the impact, she had a broken arm, the left side of her head was bleeding and she had a shard of glass in her side, i heard one of the paramedics say she'll live. Poor baby.

But she looks sad for some reason, she's crying, everyone looks okay for the most part wait, a paramedic is coming. Look there's someone in a stretcher, he's all covered up, he must be dead.
Oh god i hope i didn't hit a pedestrian. There uncovering the cover, wait he looks like me, oh god he is me. I'm looking at myself. Does that mean i'm dead. That can't be. It just can't. My kids need me. I was just about to hand in my report at work. I still have to pay rent. What about funarel cost. NOO!!!!!!

Please let this be a dream, no this HAS to be a dream. Theres no other way. My oldest just turned 8. Let me live. Oh man theres so much I didn't do. So much I'm guilty for. So much i need to make right. Is this truly the end? Wait my vision is going, every thing is out of focus, NO please don't go. I need to tell my wife that I love her NO!! Don't go please everything is so bright I can't see. It's too bright, it hurts I'm burning.

Please no.

Intresting except you have to lenghthen it a bit.

You mean make it longer. Okay I'll try. Guhh

Wow this is so sad. But totally awsome!!
Sparky rulz
But Treecko's right it needs to be longer.