Cool, feedback! It even looks like someone made an account, just to comment on my story.
Well then, a sequel I shall write. Though I now have to think of a classy title...
And DNA - I love Moltres, and always thought it was quite feminine for some reason...and yeah, its sprite is pretty rubbish in the GCS sprite. The PD one is okay I suppose, but meh.
Red's moment of madness will be partially explained in the first chapter of the sequel I hope, and then elaborated on throughout the next chapters.
Thanks everyone!
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