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DisehMoh
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue May 30, 2006 11:35 am
Posts: 693
Location: "One Moment I'm Digivolving."
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Ok Miasma has been giving me crap, about a copy writing, in my lit class. So I've decided to post some ORIGINAL works. Most of them will be poems. I may also decide to post some of the "Crystal Chronicals" here. (My own story, that I havn't gotten very far on.) Also I'll post some of my creative writing stuff, such as "When Worlds Collide: The story." So enjoy.
WARNING: MOST OF THESE POEMS WERE DONE WHEN I WAS BACK IN 7TH-9TH GRADE. SO THEY WILL BE CORNY!
Till our Love
As I felt your breath
I saw the lie
that twas inside.
Till your death
Love last stand
will never end.
Till the evermant
Returns.
Bring the truth
to our day
when we dance
in the snow.
So show the day
when we bond
till loves last stand.
Till our love Chloe H.
(This and all other works are unchanged, except the last names.)
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AABM
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Thu Jul 13, 2006 10:12 am
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Location: Where you MOST expect it.
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<font color="999999">hmm... the theme is good, your style is good, the color is good, Miasma is also good; Everything in that first work is GOOD!  </font> _________________AABM's "Team Seekers""I'm perhaps the least typical Ledian user you'll ever get to see in the whole OU" - AABM.
· Say, Orange looks better than gray, doesn't it?
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| Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:47 am |
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DisehMoh
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue May 30, 2006 11:35 am
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Location: "One Moment I'm Digivolving."
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[color=Lime]Diseh just stood there with his green eyes staring into the sunrise. The sun showed through his black sweater, showing his muscular physique. He crouched down because he stood at 6 feet tall, and couldn
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| Mon Oct 09, 2006 9:05 pm |
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Crunchy
Gym Leader
Joined: Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:09 pm
Posts: 3230
Location: island of giant spiders with shooting lasers
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It's funny because you're making Diseh out as the hero. But I really like how you put the whole roleplay together.
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| Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:33 pm |
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DisehMoh
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue May 30, 2006 11:35 am
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Location: "One Moment I'm Digivolving."
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I wont. I've only done this story, and then I'm thinking of writing another part.
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| Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:28 am |
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emaricaman
Fails at life
Joined: Thu Feb 23, 2006 1:16 pm
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Location: look in your sock drower
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thats ok but still good
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